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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 23:04 CDT
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I've liked your fic so far. I hope you'll continue it soon. Was is Sess. who raped Becca? I'm so curious!
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 03:01 CDT
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I've only read the 1st chapter (I'll be reading the rest soon!) and am just loving it! Some of your spelling is a bit off, but that is all the neg. stuff I noticed. I feel like you know Terri Botta's characters and the writing is (in my opinion)as seamless as you can get with being a diff. author from "The Lucky Ones". I look forward to reading more. Again, nice 1st chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lonnie On: September 20, 2005 01:54 CDT
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It seems good so far, but no offense I have to ask, is this a Mary Jane/self-insertion fic? It kind of seems that way so far, and I just wanted to ask.
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (nsi) On: September 20, 2005 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: AislynnAndraste On: September 19, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(borrowing GinA's thing) FWEE!! I lubb this chapie, and I'm really starting to like Mrs. Clarkson less and less. Just like I might've come to a middle ground with here, and here she goes with something pushing my buttons again... Ah, phooey. I love this story! Such great work.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: September 19, 2005 23:04 CDT
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this is pretty good. keep plugging away - I'm interested in seeing where you are going.
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Reviewed By: AislynnAndraste On: September 18, 2005 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O I don't know whether to gush at you or bow down in praise! I LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! this story. Yukio just radiates shmexiness! He's so good with Ian, so cute. Man...I'm craving some Starbucks coffee right about now. *goes off to get a bottle of Starbucks Mocha Frappuccino* *hands a bottle to you* I can't wait to see who'e saying "you're really cute" and who it's directed at! This story kicks ass and I've not even finished reading LO yet...you're good! I'm lucky to have such great authors as friends, yay! *does happy dance* Thanks for another chappie...*running-glomp-squeeze* I really don't like Mrs. Clarkson...she's a meany! >.< Lots er lurve!
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Title: its Gin-alike!
Reviewed By: QamarNoor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Bara! This looks like another great chapter, lol I just love how you do Ian. "You're pretty!" oohh, hehe i think I know who that is ;) looking foeward to seeing more! Gin~
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (not signed in) On: September 12, 2005 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad to see this fic continued. Go you ^_^ And good job so far... ^_~
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Reviewed By: D'Lark On: September 10, 2005 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing start! Looks like you're doing a great job keeping true to the rhythem of the origional story. Keep it up and please post again soon, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: InuOden On: September 10, 2005 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you please contact Terri-Botta and ask her for me when she will updated Coyote Child. She doesn't seem to be answering my emails. Email me back at DeadlyHib@hotmail.com
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well a good start in this story and I want to read more. Although I love Terra Botta's stories and was sad that she hasn't continued with the Cayotte Child or other Lucky Ones sequels, I am glad that SOMEONE is continuing with stories based on that series. I hope Terra will continue someday and I feel that you did justice and honor to Terra and her fics with this story. I hope you will update soon and am adding you to my favorites.
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Title: Response to Concern
Reviewed By: TheAuthoress On: September 05, 2005 04:12 CDT
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Dear Concerned~ I made sure that i not only recieved permission from Terri Botta to use her characters, but I also sent her this chapter as well as my story line/idea for preapprvoal beofre I posted. I appreciate your concern and I am sure that Terri Botta will as well. :) Bara
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Reviewed By: Concerned On: September 05, 2005 03:00 CDT
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Do you have Terri Botta's permission to use her characters? If not, your story should be deleted. I am alerting Terri Botta and the moderators on mediaminer.
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Title: Me First!
Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 00:55 CDT
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Mwahahaha! I'm the first reviewer as is my right as deh almighty beta! LOL kidding... and of course as deh beta I think the story rocks ^_^
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