| "Delving Into The Mysteries Of The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: update please
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 15:38 CDT
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Ayo! Are you going to update and add another chapter any time soon? I hope so cuz I really enjoy reading it ^ ^ I am also curious on what will ahppen to Kagome and what she would plan to do after she discovers who the true father of her baby is ^ ^
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Title: Doing great
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're doing great on the story and I want to say I absolutely love it. ^ ^ Keep up the hard work
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Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't often update fanfics but yours definately captivated me. The characterizations are fantastic. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 02:57 CDT
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Yeah which one needs her help! Wow that chapter answeref some of my question but at the same time it made me wonder why all these things were happening. Like if she would have followed fate where who he have taken her. But anyway great story!!
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Reviewed By: amika On: February 25, 2006 18:41 CST
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plzz. update soooooooon....... iwanna know what will happen next...... i love it!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: amika On: February 25, 2006 16:57 CST
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why aren't you updating? it's great plzzzzzz. update soooooooooon...........
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 31, 2005 01:17 CST
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WOW! I feel bad for Kagome not knowing what happened in her life for the age 16 to 17. Now all these memory are coming back. Her hisband is acting funny. And nobody will tell her what is going on. Well now I see why. Horeshio is too cute. Getting checked by a 8 year old. I can't wait til we find out who his father is.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:32 CST
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Alright... It is an interesting take on the actual Inu-Yasha story line. However it might have been better to move a bit more precisely with the plot, unless you have other plans. Either way there was a fairly broken moment right when you introduced Inu-Yasha(Kage at the time) In which Kaede just shoved this kid and Kagome together. It makes absolutely Zero sense. You need to build some form of trust between Kage and Kaede for her to do that. Also it would have made some more sense if Kaede had sent Kikyo with the two. Otherwise I don't see too many problems with it. With the fight, saying "I'm no good with them." Isn't a real excuse, try and visualize it and write what you see. Thank you and keep submitting to FFARG!
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Title: More Please
Reviewed By: QTpie (not signed in) On: November 12, 2005 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm really enjoying this fict that you've got here. It is a true shame that you have so little reviews for such an intricate and a well-written story. The drifts between the past and the present are done very smoothly and your interpretation of the characters are nearly spot on. Great story, do keep up the excellent work depsite your lack of reviews. I'm sure once readers discover this jewel of a story among the rocks, you'll get more reviews. Until the next chapter, keep the creative wheels turning and keyboard typing. Ja!!
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Title: FFARG: Prologue
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 18:08 CST
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There was one glaring error in the last line of the prologue; however, if there were any other grammar or spelling errors, they weren't obvious. Overall, the prologue for "Delving into the Mysteries of the Past" was not bad at all. It caught my attention; it was interesting and well written with few technical errors, and I have a good grasp of where the story will go. Good job and thank you very much for submitting to FFARG! Dee
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Title: Come on!
Reviewed By: Yami396 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 07:21 CST
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Someone please review!
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Title: Inuluvher151
Reviewed By: INULUVHER151% On: October 02, 2005 16:44 CDT
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hey this is a really great chapter well kagome didn't keep to her word lol.
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Reviewed By: INULUVHER151!!!! On: September 30, 2005 17:20 CDT
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hey i really like this story can't wait unill u update again
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Title: Hi^^
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi^^ I love the story and wish for you to keep it up. If I have to score what ppl write I'd say yours desevers a 10-10 ^^ keep it up k?
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Title: Review!!
Reviewed By: Yami-chan On: September 06, 2005 20:22 CDT
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Please review people, I'm begging you.
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