| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 11:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is so good! BTW, I caught the direct quote from Piccolo. Nice touch. Done it myself.
Oh, that was a nice kiss. And I saw the Lisa and Radditz thing the first time I saw the names in the same paragraph together. That one was easy. But how will Yamcha react to all this. I'm not worried so much as to when the stuff that happened in the dream will happen as to how the other's are going to react to Bulma and Vegeta. lol, that should be amusing... |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2002 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you have done a good job so far in this story, but when will Vegeta and Bulma actually start making love in this story? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 07, 2002 04:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg I thought i was gonna bite my nails clear up to my elbows. Great chapter, I went from one emotion to another and you haven't even put out a lemon yet. God help me when you do (hehe). Zarbon is freakin me out, Nappa's temper has me concerned, poor Raditz has it bad, Veggie's turning into a real possessive jerk and Bulma is caught in the middle of this mess. Even "that time of the month" for me isn't that stressful. This story rocks and I hope you update asap. Keep up the great work> Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 19:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sat here for the last 5 minutes rereading the last line hoping that more would appear. That chapter was so good! I feel so sorry for Radditz. Poor baby! It's so sad when the one you love loves another. I hope he gets a happy ending. I can't wait forthe next chapter! This story is amazing.-JB |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 17:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is too good plz put up more im loven it and plz plz plz update this asap
loven it,
mizu |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 10:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kick @ss, onna!!! The last two chapters were awesome. Hopefully, the long awaited lemon will be in your next update **crosses fingers**
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2002 00:52 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you have left me hooked. I can't wait for the next update. |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: February 04, 2002 18:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better!!! please write more soon as posible. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 04, 2002 16:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome chapters!!! What a talented writer you are. Feelings between B/V are starting to get serious and with both sharing the same bed-hubba, hubba. I don't trust Nappa though and, I can't believe I'm saying this, I feel sorry for Raditz. Poor baby is gonna have to go about it alone. Can't wait for the next update. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2002 02:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so loving this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 01, 2002 10:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! What I would give to spend a week with Vegeta!! This little jewel is moving along quite nicely and I'll be waiting for your next update. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2002 00:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I went back and reread my first review and saw all the spelling errors. Sorry about that, but that just shows you how late I was for work. Anyway I read the last two chapters and I must say that this story is a real gem. I like how you are building a relationship between V/B instead of having them just jump right in bed together like in some fics. I can't wait for your next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 15:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story ie soooo good that I'm making myself late to work ro read it. I haven't read the last two chapters yet but I will as soon as get home. Good job.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 25, 2002 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, so Raditz does care about Bulma after all, and I thought it was all lust. Zarbon, on the other hand, is a total asshole and I hope that soon you will take care of that little problem (hint, hint)^.^. |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 21:02 EST
Comment/Review:
I'm soooo hooked on this fic! I love it!!! |
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