| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2002 17:09 EST
Comment/Review:
wow.. what a good fic! I don't usually go for au fics but this one is turning out really great!.. if you don't kill Nappa, you should have him like respect her now cause of her strenght or something weird like that *heheh* just an idea.. ;) I can't WAIT to read more..its killing me having to wait with all these great fics on this site.. I'll end up poping before I'm threw *heh* |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2002 21:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BITCH!! I hope Lisa's death is very, very slow and painful. As for Nappa, his death (if he isn't already dead. Way to go Bulma!) should be quick and painful. Extremely painful. He's been pissing me off since the beginning of the story. Anyway, the bonding scene...wow...that's all I can say. Very, very good. So, as always I'm waiting for the next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: kandi On: February 23, 2002 02:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT GETS BETTER AND BETTER EVERY TIME I READ A CHAPTER. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 22, 2002 23:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was awesome, if I could I would give it a 20. A 10 just doesn't seem do it justice. I never thought that bonding could be such a turn-on. I started wishing that someone would be doing it to me :D. The shower scene was great too. You need to dispose of Lisa in a very very very painful and graphic way. Nothing else will satisfy me, and while you're at it remove Zarbon's skin and boil him in oil. Vegeta needs to get rid of Nappa for what he did to Bulma. I think that Bulma drew her strength from Veggie or he gave it to her thru their bond. Let's not forget about Raditz. I feel so sorry for that poor bastard b/c he was used by Lisa and he still has it bad for Bulma. Pls find him a girlfriend. I would volunteer, but I refuse to be with a man whose hair is longer than mine. Oh yeah, in answer to your question, I never stop reading b/c I love doing it. My grandpa told me that once you stop using your eyes and your brain to process info your braincells start to die, and mom told me that the best revenge is to live a long life. Well considering how healthy I am and my love for reading, I'm gonna be pissing off alot of people in the future ^_~. Till ur next update, take care. |
Reviewed By: a wee problem On: February 19, 2002 03:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapters 10 & 11 are the same but otherwise a great story |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2002 15:46 EST
Comment/Review:
WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! GO VEEGIE GO. LOL that was good scary but good. BAD LISA BAD!!!! so Zrbon is using her. well im sorry but if she cant see that i feel sorry for her. so are you puting up the next one soon? better be iv been so bored having nothing to do. *sigh* oh well.oh im put ing up my first fic soon.
hope you'll read my fic and vary good fic,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2002 09:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! Great lemon, but that lil' Lisa bitch...tsk, tsk, tsk. I just want to reach my hands into the moniter and wrap it around her neck and give it a good shaking. **Lisa, are you mental!?! What the heck were you thinking!?! Zarbon is a giant ass, this is no way get him back into your life. 4get the fool and go find yourself some sort of low self esteem support group that meets at least twice a week! Maybe with a lil' therapy and possibly some prozac you might have a shot at being normal again. Bad Lisa! I'm so dissapointed in you! Naughty Bad! Naughty Bad Lisa!**
Great story Cha!!! Keep up the good work. Hey I have a question for you. Have you ever seen LiliB's Vegeta/Bulma fanart...especially the shower one? |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2002 00:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice opening line! Let's see...what should I talk about first? Hmh... Well I really liked the shower scene. Very, very steamy. It doesn't make any sense how a cartoon character can be as sexy as Vegeta. It's a damn shame really. Now for the sad part of this chapter. Poor Radditz. He only seems to catch a break when Vegeta delievers one to his jaw. I can't believe Lisa played him like that and I was just starting to like her too. Well if no one else will love him I will (in this fic anyways). I really hope things work out for him. Poor dear! Anyway very good chapter and I am as always waiting for the next.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 17, 2002 00:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG What a cliffy!! The bitch was working for Zarbon all along!!! Oh no, Veggie's plans are now gonna be public knowledge. I almost forgot, the lemons were great too. Please continue asap. Great Job!! |
Reviewed By: Kapies On: February 09, 2002 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, will you please write more and soon. I love Vagita ans Bulma fan fiction. |
Reviewed By: Sara On: February 09, 2002 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, i love this story. i can't wait til the next chapters. I have been reading it from about 3 different sites. *smile* SO, hurry up w/ the next chapters pleaz. thanx :) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are going to make me cry. Poor poor Radditz. But I guess his pain is all for the greater good (the advancement of the V/B relationship). Maybe Lisa will be able to help our sad Saiyan friend. Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the review and the acknowledgement at the being of chapter 21.-JB |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: February 08, 2002 22:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thx for the complement i honistly feel that this is one of the best fics i have read and thats over 120 fics any way plz you must put up more this is the only fic iv read that makes me feel im there watchin' it all happen. you truly are a good auther. anywho plz put up more ASAP.
loven it,
mizu |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 08, 2002 12:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. You have managed to do what only one other author has done-and that's to make me like Radditz more than Vegeta **checks her temperature**. I guess the long haired cutie cared for Bulma more than he was letting on. Maybe Lisa can get him out of his blue funk and make it easier for him to forget about Bulma. As far as B/V goes, I see they're starting to really communicate. I loved Veg's confession, and Bulma's reaction at the end of the chapter. Could that possibly mean that some lemon candy is right around the corner or will Veggie wait till they get to earth? I'll be on tranquilizers waiting for your update. HHHHHHUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYY!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 08, 2002 12:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaawwwww. Thanks for the compliment. I must say it's an improvement, cause at home I'm referred to as Queen Painintheass. Well written chapter. Poor Goku now knows that Bulma will be forced to breach the shield, and that he has a brother. I wonder if Radditz' state of mind will complicate things. I guess I'll continue reading to find out. Good job. |
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