| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: May 12, 2002 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that was a fast update, great one too. Loved the B/V lemon as well as Lisa's "final exit". Well, I suspected Victor would have a problem letting go of Amanda, and I was right. I wonder what he plans to do. Whatever it is I hope Radditz wipes the floor with him. Can't wait for the next chap, and take your time. You're busy, I'm patient *cat rolls on floor laughing*. Updates for this fic are worth the wait ^_^. Ja |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2002 14:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't even have to tell you how great this chapter was!!! I am soooooo happy for Radditz. I swear he like the best character in this story. *hears growl from behind her* Well...I mean after Vegeta of course.
I can't wait to see what happens to Lisa in the end of all this. Death hopefully.
Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter(your probably getting tired of hearing me say that).-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 11, 2002 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, what lemony goodness!! They are so perfect for each other and you made their first time beautiful, tender, romantic and passionate. I have a feeling that Victor's gonna rain on their parade. The nerve of the guy thinking that Amanda would go back to him. I mean why would you want a scooter when you can have a Porsche, right? Anyway, I think Lisa is deluding herself in thinking that she'll get a reward for the capture of Zarbon. Oh she'll get something all right, but it won't be in the form of perks (more like pricks...oops I meant jerks ^_^). As always another great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one big time! Ja |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2002 04:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How in the world did I miss this update?! I guess I should start checking my e-mail more often. Anyway this was another great chapter and I am soooo happy for Radditz!!!! Waiting for the next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 06, 2002 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Cha, so glad you're back! If you don't mind, now that you're "back home", I'll r&r here. I've got nothing against FFN, it's just that to me MMO was kinda like the birthplace of DITH. Speaking of which, awesome chapter. Now we know that Bulma's training will be for the most part mental (did that sound ok?). Veggie's training in the HTC and Radditz and Amanda are gonna get laid. I'm so happy for them ^_^. I can't wait for the lemony chap! Again, welcome home ^_^. TTYL |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2002 00:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
HEY YOU!!!!!!!! WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 02, 2002 13:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
WWWEEELLLCCCOOOMMMEEE BBBAAACCCKKK!!! :D |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2002 18:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
run the hell away Zarbon's having hentai thoughts. love the fic and plz let Zarbon die soon. the pea brain of his is really starting to scaring me. plz put up more soon.
love the fic,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Dragon_Optic [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 19:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fic i have ever read by far i cant stop waiting for the next chapter to come out if you keep this up long enough you could turn this into a book if you wanted well keep it coming cant wait to see the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Laurenada [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2002 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please I need more hentai and drama and more of that good stuff. 4/2/02 |
Reviewed By: ronnie On: April 25, 2002 06:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD!!! |
Reviewed By: dbzkeri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 11:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could've, I would've given your fic a 100 out of 10 on all of those, lol. ^^ Sry that it took so long for me to review, I hadn't realized that you moved to here until a few days ago!!! ^^;;; The 2 chaps were amazing, you're one of my fav writers ever!!!!!!!!! ^_^ I'm surprised that no one has made a fan art for your fic yet...it would look really kewel. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Saiyan Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 14:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the best v/b fic i've read. It's very original. You have great talent. See you next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 12:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Radditz (never thought I'd say that)! I'm so glad he disposed of that jerk Nappa, though it might not be healthy for him that he lied to Vegeta. Oh, well. Please tell me that Zarbon has some kind of torture in mind for Lisa the witch! Man, I hate her! Well, I'm sure whatever he does to her it'll be painful. This was yet another great chapter and I am dying to see what you do with the next one.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 02, 2002 06:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Happy Day!! Raditz cleaned Nappa's clock and Zarbon is about to put a major dent in Lisa's social calendar. Let me whip out my violin. Now I just hope that Bulma's plans go without a hitch, but something tells me you've got something nasty planned for our favorite lovers. Great chap, great fic. Can't wait for ur next update. Ja |
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