| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: chibic On: September 03, 2002 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!!!!!! what a wild imagination you have~ it's really great so far, please continue to write more!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 30, 2002 23:44 EDT
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Wow! I just came across this fic today and read through Ch. 24 practically straight through! And I still have plenty to read before I'm caught up! You've got a lot of good plot lines going, and it takes talent to have them intertwine and affect each other as they have in your story. I love how Vegeta's plan continues to evolve with new developments. The whole thing with Radditz's unrequited love was a nice touch, and I can see how it's actually playing into the story quite nicely. Zarbon is the perfect villain. And somehow Bulma's in the middle of every plot! Well, she wanted some excitement didn't she? :) Great job, loving the story, and I'll review again when I get further along. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 23, 2002 12:53 EDT
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Hey welcome back girl! I hope that this time it's for good ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Khris On: September 16, 2002 21:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it as always!! I can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 05:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you're back!!!!!! Well you already know I loved it. I'm glad that Vegeta has some control over himself. R/A moments were perfect. God I love those two! Okay Victor is really starting to scare me with the whole killing themselves to be together forever. Zarbon, Zarbon, Zarbon, when will you learn? You already know this is one of my favorite fics and I can't wait for another update!-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 02, 2002 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!! For once Veggie showed some restraint and didn't jump Bulma's bones by the pond. Ahhhh, but the R/A lemon...that was yummy *licks lips*. On the other hand, I despise Victor and Zarbon with every fiber of my being. I only hope that you give them both gruesome and disgusting deaths. That would make my day, my month and (being as I have no life) probably my year. So until your next update, TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 02, 2002 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was nothing short of total awesomeness! I absolutely love the R/A moments. They are so great together. Picollo's disgust is just so funny. I mean he looks like a male but what does he do for "fun". He's asexual, so I guess he could literally go f*ck himself, but would he? Inquiring minds want to know. Anyway, all I can say about Victor is that he should be strapped to a chair and be forced to watch a 7 day tv marathon featuring Barney (the purple twit). Oh and take away his booze. That would be the perfect torture for that jerk. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 02, 2002 02:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you're back! I hope it's for good this time. Well as you already know I reviewed on FFN, but here goes. I absolutely loved the lemon with B/V. It left me breathless. Bulma is one lucky lady. All the men I've ever known go to a shower to TAKE a shower and nothing more. Boring bastards. |
Reviewed By: destiny On: June 17, 2002 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is brilliant,truly one of the best i have ever read!but it really upsets me loggin on 2 find you havent added anymore so please write more!oh and i hope you wanna be a writer coz your gonna get there no prob.your the best! |
Reviewed By: Tazy On: June 16, 2002 08:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really great better then some that i read out of books! i read all and i give the story 10 out of 10. keep up the good work! please write some more asap. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 01:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is up with me?!?!?!?!?! If it wasn't for Susan's review on one of my fics I never would have seen this. Will you please check and see why I haven't been getting the updates because as I've said before this is by far one of the best -and I mean like in the top 3- fics that I've ever read!
Anyway, I must say that you really out did yourself with these two chapters, espacially the last. It was so-so-so...Well I can't think of words to describe it but just know that it was so something wonderful. I'm so happy for Vegeta.
So, Zarbon has finally seen how the other half lives. I hope he can change his ways, because I kind of like him in this fic (he got a big boast when he rid us of Lisa). I wonder will Vegeta be willing to help Zarbon after all the s#@& they've been through. Hmm...
Damn Victor! If he does anything to Radditz (not that he could physically). I will...well give me a minute and I'll think of something. Why can't he take a hint? I mean he didn't decide to pursue her again until Radditz got her, anyway. Why does everybody always want what Radditz wants (well in this case has ~_^)? I for one would most definately read a Radditz/Amanda fic.
'Horitzontal Sparring'...hee hee ^_^. I love Goku.
Well I hope this extra long review makes up for my absence lately. If you update again and I don't review in the first twenty-four hours please send me some kind of reminder because I don't want you to think for a minute that I've lost interest in this story because I never could. Til next time.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG WHAT A CHAPTER!!! That was stupendous, great, fantastic and magnificent the way you made Veggie become an SS. Wow, talk about different. I don't know what else to say except that you're a damn genius. The way Veggie brought Bulma back was nothing short of beautiful (sighs). Now back to more disturbing stuff, Amanda is missing and Victor has gone from a nut to a friggin homicidal maniac. Promise me that Radditz will do him in and please, I beg you, make it painful and extremely slow. I want that low life, scum sucking, good for nothing piece of sh*t to make his final exit in the most gruesome way possible. Whew! glad I got that off my chest. Oh and did I mention that this chap was awesome? Well, it is, in fact the whole story is one of the top 5 best B/V get togethers I've ever read. You should be proud ^_~. Till next time , Sue. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 02:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man what an awesome chap! It was surprising to see that Zarbon actually felt guilty about some of the things he's done. Now he's contemplating going to earth...I think this is gonna really complicate things. I have this sick idea of him pairing up with the delusional and totally f*cked up Victor to do something to Radditz. You know the old saying "I'll scratch your back if you scratch mine", well Zarbon might ask for Victor's help in delivering Bulma to him. Then again I have had 15 cups of coffee and I'm ready to start some shit, so lets just forget my ramblings. Now back to your story-Victor is a classic case of fatal attraction. He's a nut and that hasn't gone unnoticed by Amanda. I'm starting to fear for her safety and so help me if he does anything to her I'll jump into your story and do some serious damage to that a$$hole (there I go again *sighs*). As far as Veggie goes, I knew he would be foaming at the mouth. I'm just glad that he didn't turn Kami into a crispy critter and instead gave the old dude a chance to explain what really happened to Bulma. With Veggie helping her out I think she'll be just fine. You know that was sweet of you to say you'd write a R/A fic even if I'm the only one that reads it, but I suspect that more people would be checking it out. I believe that JB would definitely be tempted to read it (yeah JB, I know I'm being ballsy by getting you involved, but hey I'm overly caffeinated and not responsible for my actions ^_^), and EmberMaxximusTalentus (great writer) seems to be enjoying this fic as well. Whatever you decide to do is AOK with me. I guess the main thing is to finish this fic first before thinking of doing any others. Again, great update. TTYL ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 27, 2002 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome chap. I loved it when Bulma found the clothes neatly folded-lol. I would've loved to see the look on Popo and Kami's faces when B/V were gettin it on. Victor has some major issues to deal with-mainly DENIAL. He has a better chance of getting syphillis from Cleopatra than of getting Amanda back. I mean why would she, when she has a gorgeous hunk of animation waiting for her at CC. Personally I think he should put some lipstick and a blond wig on his right hand (or whichever one he uses) and deal with it ^_^. I don't like what's happened to Bulma and I hope she heals quickly. This is gonna piss off Veggie big time and he might force Kami into telling him everything regarding this type of training. On a different note, I was visiting Kaji's site and I saw DITH posted there too. I think it's a great idea to have this story up at different sites so alot more people can read it and love it like I do, but I noticed that you have a different name there too. Are you under the Witness Protection Program or something? j/k :P Don't mind me, it's late and I'm rambling, so I'm outta here. TTYL |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!! .....OOOOOHHHHHHH! I swear you are the best lemon writer I've ever read! This was an amazing chapter and the best part (aside from the lemon ^_~) is that Lisa's dead! Hooray!-JB |
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