| "Forever Fornever Tantei" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: rosered On: December 05, 2006 19:53 CST
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This is a great story, one of my favorites! Why aren't there more reviews? You certainly deserve it. The only problem I see is that the team seems much less powerful then at the end of the anime. I can understand that making a mostly human threat workable would be a problem left the way they were.
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Reviewed By: foxgirl28 (not logged on) On: November 28, 2006 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story :]
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 18:33 CDT
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Normally i would read this on ff.net on review there but scene it is not there 'hint hint' i will review here. i really hope that they can save kurama. i liked this. please add more soon.
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Reviewed By: bancomat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 06:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just one of the best written fics i read in a long time. also, i read between death and reality, loved it as well but i'm to lazy to review separatly
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Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 15:48 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: stix
Reviewed By: kahuffstix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 09:32 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 29, 2005 21:35 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: FFRG chapter one
Reviewed By: Kellen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 23:33 CDT
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Thanks for submitting to the FFRG. Since I've read (and probably forgotten to review) on FFN, I was thrilled to see this here, and I jumped at the chance to review on the FFRG. Truthfully, you already know I enjoy your writing. It's always wonderful to find someone who understands the English language and who seems to respect the rules. So, down to the nitty-gritty... There are a couple problems I spotted, and it mostly has to do with some punctuation and formatting. Here: "...on his fighters; Chuu, Rinku,..." The semi-colon there needs to be a colon (:). There are a couple places where there should be a paragraph break but there isn't. Nothing major. I totally applaud your characterization of Kuwabara: he may not be the brightest kid, but he's not stupid and I'm glad to see you treat his character with respect. They all seem in character (and, yes, I've read the second chapter as well). Keep up the good work, m'dear, and I'm looking forward to more. Cheers,Kellen (or Blitzkreig, from FFN)
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 17, 2005 16:28 CDT
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i loved this chapter. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 07, 2005 21:38 CDT
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i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon. thankyou for making a sequal to between reality and death. i have read lots of fanfic but that one is all time favorite.
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