| "Marry Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: continue!!!!!! please.
Reviewed By: CuddleBunny89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
omigawed how could you just LEAVE it at that.. keep going keep going keep going!... and how could inuyasha just leave the grandpa-impersonating-naraku alone with kagome and her family (minus her grandpa of course) !! please dont give up on this fic!
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 10:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I didn't put her down did I? if I did that wasn't my intention...sorry...luvs Ty
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Title: hay dont let the flame get you down
Reviewed By: bakasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont let the flame get you down garnet says its good so there i like it hahahahaha im so smart to bring you up not put you down like some peapol! >> your pen pal garnet
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of confused right now...I see that you put 'thanks for the reviews' in some of your chapters...but...it seems like I'm the first one reviewing here...did you delete the story and repost it or something like that? well any way...I like your story...but I also think that your not putting enough detail into it...like the whole Kikyou situation...I don't even know what that was about...I understand the way your going with this though...I think it could be a better story if you kind of redid a couple things in a couple of the chapters...anywayz...good job...update soon...luvs Ty
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