Reviewed By: TheMuffinAlchemist On: September 10, 2005 11:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I love Royai, and I love angst! This was great. You're right, it was short, and I wish it were longer, but you're right to be proud of yourself for it! All the Royai fics I've read are cute and cuddly (and that's always cool too); I've never read a Riza deathfic (though I kinda gotta say the double-suicide was a bit cliche. Oh well. It was still good.) before. Very good job, I liked it.
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