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Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 17:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 10: Chibi-Usa's Disappearance it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 9: Abducted it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 8: Diamond it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 7: Sailor Pluto it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 6: A Team Once More it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 5: A Mother's Acceptance it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 4: Revealing the Truth it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3: Another One Taken it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2: Loss it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1: Changes it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2011 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the prologue it was great. |
Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 15:40 EDT
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This story has got some real potential--your ideas are very original! :) I think that it could benefit from a rewrite, just to flesh out some scenes and really show how much Usagi is changing through the story... but otherwise I think it's fantastic! Any chance that you'll ever finish it? *hopeful smile*
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Reviewed By: SailorAvalon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 08:34 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o OMG! That is just an absolutely amazing story! I srsly can't wait for the rest. Thank you for sharing your awesome gift with the rest of us. Marlyn
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Reviewed By: x--BlueEyedBeauty--x On: March 30, 2008 09:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this story. You write so well and the plot line is so creative that it's no wonder. I was pratically sitting at the edge of my seat through the last few chapters. Gasp I didn't think King Endymion would actually kiss her - does she even kiss back? and what happens afterwards? And also what about the Negamoon and there soon to be attack. PLEASE update soon because this is one of the best stories i've ever read :D
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Title: I see what you did thar
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 01:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was ... unexpected. O_O Very clever setup to pairing Usagi and Mamoru. Though I do have to confess that I find Usagi's about face, character-wise, a little hard to believe. Maybe if you had done a scene or two featuring Usagi employing her ditzy mask before deciding to drop it altogether would have helped in the transition. Though you tend to be a somewhat overdramatic in some places (but that's just personal tastes really), you did a great job of wrapping the past to the present to the future and back to the past again. And I like this version of King Endy, he's actually got a personality. ;)
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