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Reviewed By: SailorAvalon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2008 08:34 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o OMG! That is just an absolutely amazing story! I srsly can't wait for the rest. Thank you for sharing your awesome gift with the rest of us. Marlyn
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Reviewed By: x--BlueEyedBeauty--x On: March 30, 2008 09:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this story. You write so well and the plot line is so creative that it's no wonder. I was pratically sitting at the edge of my seat through the last few chapters. Gasp I didn't think King Endymion would actually kiss her - does she even kiss back? and what happens afterwards? And also what about the Negamoon and there soon to be attack. PLEASE update soon because this is one of the best stories i've ever read :D
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Title: I see what you did thar
Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 01:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was ... unexpected. O_O Very clever setup to pairing Usagi and Mamoru. Though I do have to confess that I find Usagi's about face, character-wise, a little hard to believe. Maybe if you had done a scene or two featuring Usagi employing her ditzy mask before deciding to drop it altogether would have helped in the transition. Though you tend to be a somewhat overdramatic in some places (but that's just personal tastes really), you did a great job of wrapping the past to the present to the future and back to the past again. And I like this version of King Endy, he's actually got a personality. ;)
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Reviewed By: sc1986 On: March 05, 2008 15:25 EST
Comment/Review:
i love this story and i hope you plan on updating!!
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Reviewed By: Blue Rose On: January 01, 2006 23:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very good; especially the idea of Endymion, falling back in love with his wife's past self. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 12:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 24 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 23 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 22 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 21 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 20 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 19 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 18 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 17 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 16 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 15 it was great.
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