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 Reviewed By: Lady Katasha (not logged in)  On: September 30, 2005 15:26 CDT
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This is a really great story. But I find it hard to read. There isn't any indents for new paragraphs, or at least a space between them. Commas and other punctuation I found lacking in some spots. Besides this, your storyline is wonderful. I wish to read more, but will enjoy the story better if you make these few minor adjustments.
 Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 15, 2005 13:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story keep up the good work please update soon. ^-^

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