Reviewed By: Katrina Kadabra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Mewtwo is probably one of my favorite Pokemon characters (next to Sabrina) because he's one of the few members of the cast that shows some depth. I like your idea. However, I feel at points you're trying to force the words to rhyme. Most of us don't think with a rhythm to our words. I wonder how it would turn out if you re-wrote this not as a poem, but just as Mewtwo's natural thoughts. The quote at the end is very nice, I would definatly keep that. Good luck to you. |
