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Reviewed By: leta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 20:46 CDT
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I loved this fanfic! it was very pretty and very well written. Awesome job!
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Reviewed By: lelalemon On: March 25, 2010 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfiction so much. I started reading it on fanfiction.net and wanted to read the last chapter without the censoring. It was unbelievably wonderful and I want to thank you for writing it.
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Reviewed By: Anon256 On: June 05, 2009 20:04 CDT
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Frankly, your story is rather boring.
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I have the stupidest grin on my face right now. That was just gorgeous. I loved: how you tied their name 'Bad Luck' into the story in just the right place - how you made Hiro confront Yuki just like in the manga - how you really turned Maiko into a fully fleshed out character - how Yuki only likes Shu's music and doesn't criticize it - how he still manages to lightly criticize his lyrics - how Shuichi's personality perfectly fits with the manga - how Yuki is loathe to tell anyone about their relationship, just like the manga. In short, I love the fact that you wove the main themes of the story into a completely new setting. Bravo!! ^_^
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Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't read all of this story yet, so I'm still undecided about it. I'll make sure to keep reading. I like it so far, though... Think it moved a little quickly. Keep it up though!
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Title: This story is awesome
Reviewed By: Kyuuni_The _Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was the best stroy ever!!!! please put more to the story plz plz plz plz =^_^=
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Title: I REALLY loved it
Reviewed By: yashagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 01:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i believed that your style was perfect very original and your grammar was great except 2 mistakes throughout the whole story. I've had a true pleasure reading this story. yesterday when i started reading it i couldn't finish it so i thought about the story all day, and truth betold i never think about stories all day. I'd say that this would be my first. ja for now and you will be in my fav authors on fanfiction.net and mediaminer.org. (\ (/
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Reviewed By: rinnohito On: November 11, 2006 17:07 CST
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god, this was cute. you seem like a really awesome person. i'd email you but i dont have an account on this site =__= i donno if you spend a lot of time online, and this sounds sooo um obsessive and stalkerish, but i hardly ever find people interesting enough to talk to. XD so if you're bored and want to chat about useless stuff, email me! its rinjin07@gmail.com (also for MSN) XD im on a lot for lack of much better to do with my time XD
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Title: EXCELLENTE!
Reviewed By: Inari_kari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 21:21 CDT
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Hey, I hope you have a sequel in store for me^^ This was way amazing! I was reading like as if I was watching a movie and this was just...just awesome! Yes, I loved everything, I love how you managed to pacify the fight between Maiko and Shuichi in the end, and...my gosh, Eiri, that bastard (in a funny likeable way) cheated on her with her brother!!! Hahaha, that's funny...and I'm oging to go check now if you have the next one up for me!!!!!!! EEEEE!!! ^_^ Great job!
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Title: I LUV U
Reviewed By: XOMagickMoonOX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 18:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
8D I LOVE YOU. OHMYGOD this fic was abso-fucking-lutely brilliant. It was hott and adorable and perfect in almost every freakin' aspect, and it was just............ AMAZING. You ROCK!! I present you with a big cake and a batch of cookies, and this little Shuichi plushie to go with it. *hands you the gifts* If you write a sequel, I will be most happy. ^____^
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Title: sogoi
Reviewed By: Yuji Cain On: January 29, 2006 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FREAKIN MUCH!!!!! THERE SHOULD BE A SEQUEL TO IT! And if u make one maybe it could be with Eiri getting tired of Shuichi and cheating on him wit...HIRO-SAN. Normaly i would say Seguchi-San but their is too much of that! Yuji Cain
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Title: I'm a yuki fangirl!!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 09:22 CST
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*sigh* I had to it and read all of the chapters at once, I just couldn't pull myself away. And I loved how you showed a different side to Yuki, and when he started shaking saying "He thinks that I don't love him..." I was like "Awwwwwwww I love you yuki!!!" and near the beginning, I wasn't sure if yuki was just using shu-kun, but then you had that little paragraph where he says that he needs shu-kun, and he gets all crabby without him, I was just like "aww, you really do care!" You stayed IC really well, I mean, while yuki did act different towards the end, I think the manga always kinda showed that he could have that side to him, if his past wasn't so messed up. so you let us see Yuki b/f he went bad! YAY!!!! And if you do a sequel... I'll give you cookies...um..my gravi collection... throw in free stamps.. and my eternal gratitude!!
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Reviewed By: Karesu On: November 05, 2005 08:25 CST
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I protest against this story being over! It was so good!
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Title: NOOOOO!!1
Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noo!! It can't be over yet!!! Not yet!! Nooo!!!!!! I'm so sad now. It was all goign so well too!!! OHH I just wanna die!!!!No fair! no fair no fair no fair no fair no fair!!!!!!*kicks and screams on the floor* *sigh* Okay I'm done having my little fit. Now for the real review... I so agree with you about the end of the series though I have good news in case you havent' heard. Murikami started another round of tracks with the gravitation characters. It starts where she left off in 2002. It's only in Japanese right now and she releases one track a month in Gendou online magazine. I have a friend that's read all four and she practically gave me a play by play. If you want to know what's going on drop me line and I can tell you more. oh and that goes for anybody reading this too. I'm anxcious for them to come out with the English compilations, but I don't think they'll be out for another year yet. Oh It's so cute *squee* lols! Great job on the end of the story by the way! It went realy well and I was so happy taht they got back together. Just as Shuichi's mood is affected by Yuki, so too are my own affected by the chapter to chapter goings on in the fanfictions I love. I really realyl hope you do a sequel. You'd be making alot of poele very very happy!!!lols lots of encouragement, ~Bakayasha
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Title: write more XD
Reviewed By: rachel the great 2.0 On: October 30, 2005 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it and if you dont write more die a horrible yukixshuichi death .i liked it when they xxxed,xxxed,and xxxed some more so write more kay bye
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Reviewed By: Alea On: October 29, 2005 08:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You would make my day if u made a sequel...just so u know ^.^ i loved ur story very well written and i hope to see more of those!
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Reviewed By: Ryua Malfoy On: October 28, 2005 21:40 CDT
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I love how no matter how depressing your stories might get, they always come out right in the end. Even Victoria Base... Roku pulls the ending into happiness a few stories later. And all the lovely sex scenes a girl could wish for...
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 21:18 CDT
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Hooray! They're back together! Y'know, Maki Murakami is continuing Gravitation...so maybe we'll see Yuki say the words later on ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ashcat (not signed in) On: October 27, 2005 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. what a cool ending! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! College and everything else could be so interesting! Please please continue this! :)
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Reviewed By: Ryua Malfoy On: October 25, 2005 20:04 CDT
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Aww, she's such a good big sister to forgive him like that... Nicely written, although sad...
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Reviewed By: Alea On: October 23, 2005 11:43 CDT
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Aaawh, poor Shu...update soon? LOL
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT!!YOU posted more!!!! Yahhh!!!! I was so happy when I found out!!! I'm so happy! Porr Shuichi, I feel really bad for him right now but I hope he starts to feel better, or Yuki can take him back. Yuki was wondering in there when he had ever said he didn't love Shuichi and I think it shoudl be more like, when did he ever realyl day he did. Shuichi loved him and I guess he felt like it wasn't his responsability to tell the kid jhe loved him, he just assumed that he knew. What an ass. lols anyway, good job. Post more soon!
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Title: YEAH!!! *tear*
Reviewed By: xunxin kohaku On: October 21, 2005 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah new chapter. but but but it wasn't on fanfic. wwwaaahhhh!! oh well its here at least! *big smile* i love this story. it so good and creative. YEAH YEAH YEAH! OH POOR SHU AND YUKI! THEY ALWAYS HAVE SUCH TROUBLES! but then again thats the whole point. yippie! update soon.
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Reviewed By: Reyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 23:38 CDT
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wah! Poor Shuichi. I really hope things will start to look up in the next few chapters before Shuichi gets really heartsick...
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chpt 7: Aww.. poor Shu.. Well it had to come out somehow, and I like how you handled it. Bravo for Mrs. Shindo getting involved and trying to be a good mom! I liked that realism.
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Reviewed By: Ryua [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 20:54 CDT
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Aww, knew it had to happen... didn't want it to, of course. Man, men are just funny. Fabulous story, I love to read about their kinky little moments... but I'm glad I don't have this huge meter on my front displaying my arousal for the world to see...
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Title: Chpt 6
Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 00:20 CDT
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Well I guess it had to happen eventually that she would find out! Shu was never any good at hiding something this big anyways! Now the fall out should be an interesting thing to behold! I would think that Maiko would want to keep this quite, how embarrassing to be showed up by your little brother for a bed partner for the hottest guy in school? BTW I had to pull this out "Bondage suited Shuichi." --- never a truer statement uttered! Can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh. so sad. what a horrible situation to be in with your sister! other than that bit o'angst, what a steamy chap. i luv this fic. i Need to know how yuki and shuu will deal with the truth coming out and if maiko will be o.k. your the sh*t and i hope ya update soon. thanks.
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!! That was THE hottest chapter yet. Shuichi is such a slut! OMG! I love you! Post more soon!!!!lols!!! *dies from pleasure*
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 15:32 CDT
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I have no idea if I've reviewed or not yet but wow.. such an intense chapter, I've been waiting for this for sometime now, I'm glad you updated and now.. I'm left with waiting to see what happens next. But wow.. so sad. anyways until next tme, Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero
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