| "Just The Way You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow...i love this story. so well written and the plot so interesting. you've toned InuYasha right into the part of the jealous but protective friend who wants to be more. very well done!!!! keep it up!!! i can't wait to read more. i'm really happy to see inu pushing Kagome to become who she is, not who that kid wants her to be. go inu. can't wait to see the inu confrontation to this kid!!!
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Reviewed By: Writer of Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must agree with the other two people that have reviewed. This is a fairly well told story and it has the sense that you put forth good effort, not something throw together. It will be interseting on how, of if you even do, pull Kagome out of this mess.
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Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that was a good start. I saw no spelling or grammar errors, and your story telling abilitys are just fine. quite curious to see where this is heading. good job.
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cute! Please write more Im eager to see what happens! =D
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