| "Just The Way You Are" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was soooooo cute! this is such a good story, i only wish it was longer. i can't believe that this is your first fanfic, you're a great writer. Thanks for the story. it was a great pick-me-up to my day!
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Reviewed By: gilmork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done! I enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: xxbritnexx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was so kawaii!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an extremely entertaining story, and I simply loved it. Especially with the falling outta the tree parts. I really enjoy your style of writing, even without any lemons. The simple romance of it is wonderful. Once InuYasha gets his foot outta his mouth, that is, lol. Thanx so much for a great story.
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Title: Just The Way You Are
Reviewed By: Lunar Ice Dancer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome story.
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Title: lmao!
Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 16, 2005 10:03 CDT
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now theres a way to end with a bang! two thumbs WAY up hun. i cant help but feel kinda sorry for inu though. the ground in the fuedal era is unforgiving enough.....but to be sat on pavement?!?! ow...oh ow....
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is the second time you've updated right after I reviewed the last chapter! Freaky! But not many authors chose open endings and for that I applaud you, but maybe it was too open. You don't want to leave too many questions. But anyway very good story, you should be very proud of yourself!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 22:51 CDT
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I thpught this last chapter was very sweet and funny. I'm curious about the plan now too.
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I love the ending. You did such a great job writing this, it forever shall stay as one of my favorites! ^^ Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: September 15, 2005 10:21 CDT
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So glad they are together meant to review sooner. I like what he discovered in her diary. Gods I love your story. I find myself waiting for updates and rereading your story rather than working on my own. Maybe I should let my readers now about your story so they can harass you when I don't update quick enough :) I wouldn't do that but I'm going to recomend your story in my next update Loves and Hugs, Keep the great work coming
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwww. So cute. I like it.
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Title: Just The Way You Are
Reviewed By: Lunar Ice Dancer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, there first kiss!!
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW!! Chapter 8 is soo KAWAII!! ^^ looking forward to updates! =)
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 14, 2005 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i try to help if i can. :) i just wanted to point it out, nicely ( i think i managed to do it nicely) before someone got cranky with you about it. i'd hate for that to happen; people can be so mean sometimes. *sigh* one of your fave's huh? *blushes* tyvm, the dark cloud hovering over my head just brightened up some. i'm glad you enjoy my story, that really means a lot to me. hopefully i'll have the next chapter up soon. *crosses fingers* until then, i wish you luck on your writing endevours, and look forward to what happens next with this story.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an author who wants constructive criticism and opinins! ~huggles~ Okay the spelling and grammar errors I found were in these sentences "You're always staring off into space anymore" and "If you likes you so much..." the wording didn't make sense in those. A few misplaced words here and there too. And I noticed that in the first chapter when they were leaving Kaede's hut it said the four of them were leaving, not really a big deal but we shouldn't forget Shippou and Kirara^_^. And not to ruin your plot or anything but Inuyasha can read. He steals and reads Kagome's math book in manga chapter 25. Really the only thing I didn't agree with in the story in my own opinion was Mama. I feel like if she didn't want to interfere with Kagome's life and force things to happen like she said then she shouldn't have said anything to Inuyasha about breaking Kagome's heart but not say anything to Seiji for being a bad influence. To me it was just very hypocritical of her to say "I'm not going to say anything to the guy guy who's trying to change Kagome's personality and is making her drink, but I'll tell you what you should and shouldn't do to her." But other than that I think this story is very well written and plot is not over bearing so I hope you update soon.
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