Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was very well written and I applaud you for coming with your own theories about youkai mating. But really unless you've done serious research and checked every story out there then none of us can be sure that your theories are original. I see similarties with other theories from other stories in the prologue alone. I did give an explaination/theory of my own for youkai birthing in one of my stories but I'm not going to try and call dibs on it because someone else could have came up with the same thing. So my concern is if you come across a story that has things in common with yout theory and accuse that author of stealing it when they might never have read this or got it from someone else's story. And also if all of your characters are completely original then this story should be under non-anime and not Inuyasha. Even though it concerns demons in it, it has to least follow the Inuyasha story line or contain those characetrs to be allowed in this category.
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