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| "Things I'll Never Say" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: destiny dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really great. You did really well on the POV. The best POV of Ed that I have ever seen. You should write more stories like that.
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Reviewed By: Zuki On: September 14, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o;; Erm.... riiiiiiight. That was.... different, but as a rather regular yaoi reader, I give you a thumbs up!!
| Reviewed By: TheMuffinAlchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too bad! It was interesting, and I really liked the 1st-person POV. Yeah, your spelling and grammar does need work. Maybe you should get a beta...? Anyway, I kinda skipped over the lemony part. I'm trying to stay away from those... ^^;;; Aw, hell, damn addicting lemons... sigh... oh well. I just really loved Ed's POV, that was quite brilliant. I've never seen a songfic done this way before, with people actually speaking the lyrics... that was neat. Anyway, nice job; I liked it!
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