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| "Risky Business" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: 'Ch *giggle*
Reviewed By: elfbane5 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is *hot*, you write their moments together very well, your pace matches the violent NEED that they have for each other perfectly. I really enjoyed this story very much. keep up the good work.
| Title: Why hasn't anyone reviewed this story??
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 11:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I've read it several times and can't believe no one else has left you praise. Maybe it's because of the messed up sign in problems. Anyway, I love the level of affection and passion between Sanzo and Gojyo. The "complete bastard" screwed up Sanzo gets old. It's nice to see him really enjoy himself and show his lover so sweetness, even in his usual grumpy way. Nice job!
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