| "All the Pleasure in the World" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2010 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
chapters 9 and 10 need fixed they are all crammed together no paragraphs or breaks just one long paragraph for chapter 0 and a shorter but still single paragraph for chapter 10
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Title: continuation review.
Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanna know what Kikyo's doing with Miroku. [is it? I think it is Miroku.] Well, keep the fire burning! cheers!
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2009 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like whoa. Keep it going! ^^
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it i hope u update soon it was veryy creative n im so happy sesshy's in there:) lol update soon!
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Title: OH MY GODS!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: mirokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was teh best m/m I have read!!!! Who's teh other slave? What IS Sesshoamru's Present from Naraku??? I MUST know! PLease update.....Update already!
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Title: UpDate
Reviewed By: anime_junkie92 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ PLZ PLZ update soon. I can't wait. To tell you do the truth your story gave me nigtmares but I couldn't stop reading it so PLZ update reel soon.
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Title: Ewwww!
Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
That is just sick! I am not a fan of guy on guy ewwww thats just sick!
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Reviewed By: sadsoul On: October 03, 2005 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o O you know what this means brand new chapter coming up. Bounces around with joy. I've been stalking your story in case you updated here and not aff. Woohoo new chapter coming up :D
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is...... WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: September 26, 2005 01:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I realise I have a typo in mu last review but oh well I'm sure you get what I typed. Nice update. I enjoy this story quite a bit
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Definately intresting. For POP it's great.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: OH MY god On: September 21, 2005 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so perfect i give you a 100 for the hole thing damn your good
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