| "In The End" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: cupxofxfools [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 04:30 CST
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*wipes tears* That was beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Dimples91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god that was so sad!! I started to cry twice!!!!! My Lord that was sad! Good story though!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi that was soo sad! I am so glad he was there with him in the end. As I was writing that, I realized that is the title of this wonderful story. The title is so very fitting to this. So very sad and so very well written. You sure know how to pull the emotions out of your readers. Wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: youkai_obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Blinks* Holy hell I wasn't expecting that at the end! *blinks* I love how you showed that Kazahaya might have had an idea/knew he was dieing and that's why he so badly wanted Rikuo to hold him and not leave him. That was sooo sad. I feel bad for Rikuo as he keeps blaming himself for what happened. The dream was quite hot!! Then that ending threw me for a loop yet it brings everything that is happening together. Oi this next chapter is going to be sad one. Maybe? Maybe not? Damn cliffy! *swats it* Great job on this!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so anxious by everything that was happening by the tree The flashback scenes pulled everything together. I could feel his pain over his lover being hurt. You have a way with the written word. A true author! I cant wait to see where you go with this!! Lovely job on this!!
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