| "Redefining Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Miztikal-Dragon (not logged in) On: September 15, 2006 15:31 CDT
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oh wow... i was soo grossed out by some of the gore... but it's coo! This is an awesome story so far! please keep up the work and update asap. -Krystal-
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Reviewed By: Kurisushi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 19:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story so far. Please tell me you are going to update it soon!!!
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Reviewed By: treeperson On: January 14, 2006 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear, I really enjoy this fic. "Injure Bikky" fics aren't normally my favourite but this one, this one I like. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: UltraEra On: January 03, 2006 00:03 CST
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So excited to see another chapter up and you didn't disappoint. You're doing a great job on this fic, I can't wait to see each chapter!!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: C. Seda On: November 16, 2005 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good writing. You excel at drawing in your readers and manipulating the hell out of their feelings. I've read some of your earlier stuff, and you're really evolving as a writer. I can only imagine how good you'll be in a few years' time. Don't let anyone tell you that you don't know the characters because you do Dee and Ryo better than anybody. This story is tough to read, but chapter five gave me a little bit of hope. Although even if St. Jude saves him Bikky from being brain-damaged, I guess he's still going to be hooped for that basketball scholarship now! Another chapter would be much appreciated.
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: evilkitten On: November 06, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: evilkitten On: October 29, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update
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Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: misslady [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 15:42 CDT
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This is a good story so far and I am eagerly waiting for more. Also I really like Third Times a Charm. Please update soon. You have good writing talent and leave the reader wanting more. Misslady
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Reviewed By: UltraEra On: September 26, 2005 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is freakin' disturbing, but I absolutely love it. I've never seen anything like this before and I'm fascinated by each chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 15:38 CDT
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I haven't got much to say today so this'll be a short review beause our power's out and I'm using a friend's computer.... I love the story so far. Poor Bikky! I love Bikky....he's so adorable....and mean. Very mean. *pokes Bikky and then you* Update soon, yesh?
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Reviewed By: Ranmaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 12:27 CDT
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hi Irish, even if I am a person, who does not belive in the church as an institution, have to admit that I love the last chapter. You have a way to describe Dee in a way no one else does, and that is what I like so much about your stories. To be honest, I am more for the "softies" and my fav is Ryo but I think that you can not like one without not liking the other, those two guys are one package. *g* Don`t worry about the reviews, I have long stopped to worry about them, it does not help to ask for reviews, because most of the people do not realize that this is the only way to find out how they like the things you have written. I wrote my readers on ff.net a very lengthy AN about this stuff, but it got me not one single review more. *shrugs* Don`t let the reviews or their lack of get on you, you are a wonderful writer and I really want to read all the stories you have written and will write in the future. Thank you for sharing *hugs* Ranmaru
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Title: ugh...
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: September 15, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first, the whole foot coming off is pretty gross, but I guess those kinds of things do happen. I don't know why people feel the need to injure poor Bikky so badly, though, but hey, whatever floats your boat. Your writing's good, I'll give you some credit for that, although there are the ocational typos. Nothing too terribly bad. The characterizations, however, I felt were way off. The only one I think you came close to getting right was Carol (the poor girl, having to see something like that).
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Reviewed By: Sikandra On: September 13, 2005 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
SO SAD! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! SOON! Thanks lots!
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Reviewed By: Ranmaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!! What have you done!!!!!! I love it, not what you have done to poor Bikky, but what you have set up. As much as I like "Delicate", you said it already, it is time for a story were Dee and Ryo work together and not against each other. I can`t imagine how this accident will change their lives and how they will cope with it. Great work as usual *g* Ranmaru
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