Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Wannabe Writer On: September 27, 2005 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I apoligize, this isn't a flame really it's just my honest opinion. This fic is way too cheesy, it's childish, but very original, boring, but you described it very well, and the whole soaring and flying thing scared me after a while,I like how you put that nickname for yuugi in there it was very kawaii. So nice try good concept but it sucks. Gomen Nasai.
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