| "The Truth" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: nekoneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 03:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
this made me smile a little knowing smile. but what do i know anyway? ;) and although there were a few lines that felt a bit clunky and made the flow of thought wobble a bit, the over-all effect is still there. the perspective taken, the implied thought and feeling is so /there/ even if the lines replay opinions that are commonly thought of about the character. and the truth is, i enjoyed reading this. and that is no lie. :)
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Reviewed By: Kanade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Really made me interested but... Well... Its deep though not so deep... Maybe thats the whole art about it... You tell me... Compliments on it though. It takes courage and talent to place something on this web and i think youve got both ^^
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Reviewed By: Phyco Monkey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
You have good writing skills altough it didn't really make any sense at a couple of points, but that's okay. You have good spelling, but there were a couple of times you could have put in commas. It was interseting enough to make me want to read it. Keep up the good work!
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