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| "The Voice of Your Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 02:20 CST
Comment/Review:
this is such a sweet story
| Reviewed By: nli On: September 17, 2005 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story and 'The Wreck of My Memories' are two of the best Hiei POVs I've read; very poetic and bittersweet. (You really should post them one chapter at a time on FF.Net, so that you can get a decent number of reviews.) ^_^
| Title: corection
Reviewed By: fluff_hugger On: September 12, 2005 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if your read the last one, the ending words i was going for were,"...for the absolutaly atroious spelling" i think that may still be spelled incorectly, but what yah gona do? yah i know i'm wierd, don't tell anyone. so i sill need to end on a clean number so, a... YOU ROCK MY PUPPLE LLAMA SOCKS!!
| Title: sweet
Reviewed By: fluffy_hugger On: September 12, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great job. you realy got heia and kurama. but, thier GAY?!?!?!?!! i mean i have absolutly no problem with gay people at all or any thing like that. i mean i have some friends that are GLB, but i soooo didn't see that one coming. did a litle spin in my chair going ew.... i gess i am mostly disapointed because i wanted kurama all for myself. so sad. but great job. Question over here though. What's up with cyote child. it rocks. it would be a shame to the reader's world if you didn't finish it. so keep that one in mind kk? so great job, keep on wrighting, and i guess...koddos!!! oh, and i apologize profusely for the aboxotulty atorious spelling and gramor. at least i still retain the ability to exorsize my vocabulary. now i will stop babling, i just hate ending on bad #s.
| Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: September 12, 2005 18:57 CDT
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I was wondering if you might be updating the Coyote story soon, I'm dying to find out where it's going and what will happen. Your "Lucky Ones" universe is even popular enough to have fan fictions written about it, and have other people borrow ideas. It's definitely good, very unique and creative which is rare, so I hope you continue with it, please. If you ever need a beta, I'm more than happy to help. =)
| Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Blue Utopiah [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually checked this out because you posted the link on LiveJournal, and I am very impressed. You hit Hiei's tone, thoughts, and personality dead on. It's also difficult to introduce an OC and have her be so close to the characters while still being endearing and believable - and you did that wonderfully as well. I enjoyed this alot.
| Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: September 12, 2005 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story. It goes into the mind of one of the more interesting anime characters that I have come across. Not sure if I agree with the romance with Kurama, though. They have always just been friends and partners, but it is a possibility. They do say that friends can be the best lovers. It is good to read something of yours, again. I was beginning to worry that something might have happened to one of my favorite authors. Well, be safe. I eagerly await your next endeavor. Until next time, Fyrloche.
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