| "Suki and Tsukuyomaru: A Love Story" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: this is great
Reviewed By: habby On: September 25, 2005 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know why it took my so long to come up with something to say when it's so simple. this fic is GREAT!! i also don't get way it's taking you so long to update but i don't care. As long as it's not more than two or so weeks. more than that and i might think you're going to give up on it. but just please don't this is such a good fic and a one of a kind too. i don't say that to often either, so keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first I want to applaud you on this right from the title! I'm so happy to see someone come up with something that's truly original and not just take a recycled plot and try to do it again. You had me bought from the moment I read the summary simply because this is something no one has done before. I just can't give you enough compliments and praise on the originality of this story. And to make it even better you wrote it beautifully. You're formating, the dialogue, the story line are all great. I think I only caught one grammar mistake and that was when you use a period instead of a question mark, but who cares!? I am a fan of this story now so keep updating!
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Title: amazing!!! =)
Reviewed By: gb On: September 15, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. i love it!!! this chapter is so grea i love it!!! =)
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Reviewed By: monecque@sbcglobal.net On: September 15, 2005 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is the first of its kind. it is what i wonder about and someone has written it. it has a wonderful start
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 00:22 CDT
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good god girl, you forgot to post tissue with this. this is so sweet. i can't wait for more!!! luvs ya
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Reviewed By: cheza22 On: September 14, 2005 21:22 CDT
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still hopeyou finsh it and add me to the mailing list at mercedes_cheza@msn.com
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Title: love it =)
Reviewed By: gb On: September 13, 2005 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh!!! i love it.. and yes i cried!! =) so beautiful!!! =)
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Reviewed By: cheza22 On: September 13, 2005 19:12 CDT
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thatwas good hope yyou keep write it
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Title: So Sweet!
Reviewed By: BlackLotus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's fresh, flows so smoothly, and it's lovely! I like that it is not a typical Inuyasha/Kagome story, and that it focuses on other characters from the series. I can't wait for the next chapter! Great Job!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: September 13, 2005 16:32 CDT
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yayness! god! how do you write so deeply moving stories?i love it!keep up the good work. your stories..they move me somehow>too bad i have to kill jaken now.love ya!
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 13, 2005 08:23 CDT
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That my dear was simply wonderful. I belive that if the rest of the story is this good, it will become one of my favs. thanks again for the beginning of a beutiful story
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