| "Suki and Tsukuyomaru: A Love Story" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 19:07 CDT
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That's really good so far, I beg you to update it!
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Title: concrit? i think not.
Reviewed By: sushimi On: April 24, 2007 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
http://community.livejournal.com/truckstop_sushi/13295.html#cutid1
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Reviewed By: ldyvegeta610 On: August 26, 2006 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding! Will you be adding more to the story?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness n.s.i. On: December 21, 2005 23:14 CST
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I'm so glad to hear that more chapters will be coming and I can't wait!
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Title: This is Diamond Princess
Reviewed By: Yugiohfan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 16:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello! It's been awhile since you've updated another chapter. I've been waiting for another chapter of this story and I'm looking forward of another chapater. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: gb On: October 10, 2005 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. you made me cry again.. but a good cry.. it's a beautiful story!! =) and i wait for more plaese!!! =)
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Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 13:52 CDT
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Good job on another wonderful chapter!!! On the flashback of Suki's childhood memory, how dare her mother forced her to embroider the kimono without food, water and sleep? She is just a child that needs loving and care from a loving mother. Also, my heart sank on the part that her mother told her that if she complains, her father will tie her to the tree. One day, she will find the strength to stand up for herself and have courage to not be afraid of her father. Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 09, 2005 21:52 CDT
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Boy i'm i happy to hear from you. i was starting to think you had dropped off the face of the earth. anyway.....thanks for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 01:17 CDT
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So the woman was actually her aunt? Wow, I would not have called her "mother" if I was Suki. Very good chapter! I hope to see more of what happened to her mother/aunt after her husband was killed.
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Reviewed By: Diamond Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 13:53 CDT
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Wow!!! This story is intense and romantic!! I feel bad for Suki because of what her father did to her and how he arranges her marriage to one of the three men that he is forcing her to marry. It's a shame that her mother is not supportive of her own daughter because she doesn't have faith in her. I want Suki to marry Tsukuyomaru because he is a gentleman and a very sweet guy. Please continue this story, I beg of you.
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 16:08 CDT
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i just reread this chapter after realizing that i didn't review the first time around....and i wanted to cry over the injustice of what her father did. if he wasn't killed by tsukyomaru, i would have been happy to have killed him for you. thanks for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: gb On: September 28, 2005 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. that was intense, but great! i love reading how this story unfolds. this chapter makes me glad i'm an american living in this area! well keep up the the great writing, (like you wouldn't)! =) i'm waiting for more! =)
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness n.s.i. On: September 28, 2005 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter and I'm glad to see you're updating. There are still some grammar errors but really nothing major. Like Wehn he was about to kill her mother and said that her "concious" would be her undoing and it should have been "conscience". But other than things like that it was very good chapter and I'll be waiting for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 18:01 CDT
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wow. that was so sweet and beautiful. update soon!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: September 28, 2005 15:16 CDT
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at the begining of the story: THATS JUST WRONG! after the wrongness:aahhh how adorible!!yayness all around
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