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| "Always and FOREVER" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Oh come ON!!
Reviewed By: Titus and Driger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chief, luv ya n all babe, but seriously. You need to put a hell of a lot more detail in these chappys of yours! And stop moaning at me when I haven't put a new chappy on in a while. I do have another fic on the go, ma chappys are more detailed, I have a lot of homework an shit that needs done AND I'm working on a one-shot. So THERE!!!
| Title: HAHAHA
Reviewed By: Titus and Driger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that this is on your thing chief but it won't let me review on ma one. This is a great fic so far. it's bloody hilarious!! Just one thing tho, you really haf to get someone (who isn't me) to proof read it to sort out your spelling kk? Other than that it was fantastic please update soon. Stop bad mouthing ma fic writing skillz by the way. Ma chappys are longer than you and I actually know what I'm going to put in ma other storys, plus a one shot between Tala and Kai coming up ^.^ Ja Ne Rei's Neko_gurl.
| Reviewed By: Tasha13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude I liked it, so write more 'cause it was funny. I like how ur givin Chief a new look *nods* I would have never thought of that *sighs*
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