"The Theif, Lord, and the Priestess" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: The Theif, Lord, Amd The Priestess Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 22:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: princess of the western lands [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 01:10 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i've reviwed for your story on aff.net so the updates are posted here. ne...ano...the fifth chapter was awesome and very seductive too and i can't wait to see what kurama and sesshomaru do to kagome. as for the ratings i've given you those one. your fic is very original because i've seen other cross overs and none of them have caught my intrest like yours has and i like the fact that kurama is sesshomaru's mate too that's what made it unique and original. two. your fic is very exciting and leaves me in anticipation of what is to come next. your spelling and grammar are very good and that is a seffinate plus for me because i want to read your story not guess what you wrote or having to proread as i good and hope to understand it all. i like your style because i love sess/kags stories and this one yelled out hot hot and hot!!! i'm going to read chapter six now and i hope its good. i can't wait to see what kurama and sesshomaru do with kagome and your chapters are fairly long but they could be a bit longer. just suggesting that. i like long detailed chapters is all. update soon ja ne
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Title: The Theif, Lord, And The Priestess Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 16:55 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: UPDATE Reviewed By: ranequeen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 00:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the idea of the story but the chapters are short and sometimes jump around. I'd like to see more of youko/kagome/sesshoumaru. They keep punishing her and I think it would be nice if she got back at them. Please please please update soon!!!!
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Title: The Theif, Lord, And The Priestess Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 10:01 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: The Theif, Lord, And The Priestess Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 17:29 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: dog-demon-emiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 16:58 CDT Comment/Review: SO AWSOME!!! i joined MM just so I can get alerts gor your story! UPDATE SOON
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Title: awesome Reviewed By: Mistress_of_Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 16:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this so much. Its really good. Please update.
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Title: awesome Reviewed By: Mistress_of_Dragons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 16:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love this so much. Its really good. Please update.
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Reviewed By: Blackat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 21:58 CDT Comment/Review: Don't worry i'm getting to all that!! LOL
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Title: The Theif, Lord, And The Priestess Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 16:43 CDT Comment/Review: I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: haha Reviewed By: DarkMe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 00:40 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Poor thing, they keep tiring her out. Question, what about Shippou and Rin? Youko's reaction to Rin and the young kit, hell her going to the future is a question too, especially if she runs into a certain red head while out and about. CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: September 14, 2005 22:13 CDT Comment/Review: Nice start to your story. I'm a little confussed. IS Kagome asleep when they go to see Inu-yasha. Does Sess or Kur love her? (if your going to explain that in later chapters sorry) Well cant'e wait to read more. Please update soon!!
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