"To Be Slaves" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:18 CDT Comment/Review: i like this story. great job. please update soon.
| Title: Really Goth Reviewed By: pahhardin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 11:13 CST Comment/Review: I thought with it being so crowded space wise, it would be hard to read, but I was pleasently surprised it was simple. It was very fluid and I can see where some of the stoy is going. I am excited for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. I was suprised there was so much goth. It's hard to work in sometimes. Like that you made Kagome the "less Pain tolerant" of the 2. Grins... also very glad that Inu and Kags are together. Little confused are the girls slaves, thus the purchasing or are they soon to be wives? what is there role?
| Reviewed By: Vegetasplaymate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 21:37 CDT Comment/Review: hullo
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