| "The Taint of the Pure Blood Sanctuary" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: cowgurl_chic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i really really like this fic... i really hope u update soon... im dieing to know wat happens....please please update soon!!! PLEASE
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2008 00:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon. i would like to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, but, you should run a spell checker through it and also make sure your punctuation is correct. When you do speech I sometimes see "he was running." instead of "He was running." things like that, even as small as the capitalization or periods or commas can be distracting. But, good story none-the-less.
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 18:09 CDT
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please please update soon!!!
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update again soon. Can't wait to see what they plan for Enma and if Kagome gets Shippou to believe that she does love him.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 01:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Really good! It's been a long time since you've updated this -- I hope you get a chance to continue it soon -- I'm hooked on it!
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Do you have any plans for continuing this story. Although it could use a bit of a spell check the fix is very well done. Please update soon.
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Title: please read
Reviewed By: gibsonharlot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated your fanfiction very high because i have enjoyed it so far! please update your fanfiction because i have been waiting for it. Please hurry and update because i want to know what is going to happen next! thankyou
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Title: please read
Reviewed By: gibsonharlot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated your fanfiction very high because i have enjoyed it so far! please update your fanfiction because i have been waiting for it. Please hurry and update because i want to know what is going to happen next! thankyou
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Reviewed By: kitsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
10/10 on everything and i mean it!! Seriously. I love your story and its on my favorites list!! Plz update soon!! Ja Ne!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see if Shippou lives, what happen to them, what King Enma did, how Hiei revenges them and what goes on with Kagome. Also what the rest of the SD does to Enma.
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:50 CDT
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Thanks for the clarification. It really helps. And what's up with this cliffie in chapter 9? You're worse than I am at keeping people in suspense for the next chapter. I just tease them, you're torturing me! I don't like it when people beg for the next chapter and I try not to do it to other authors cause I know how hard it is to write the next chapters, but in this case you have caused me to brake my rules. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!!!! Please, I'll give you a cookie. (Turns pleading cute eyes at Mysterious_Tears)
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 13:47 CDT
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I loved it one again! But i was wrong about y she said shippo but oh well, this is just as good cuz ma other idea was a bit confusing anyways...lol...do u know ure spelling keiko or kayko differently i don't care i just wanted to know if u knew, hurry up n up update again!!!!wwwwoooooooooowoooooowooooo!lol
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 11:57 CDT
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nooooo!!!!!!!! poor shippo :( Update, you need to make things better...
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 01:46 CDT
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Really want to see more on this fic!! Its so good!! Please ^-^
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