| "The Taint of the Pure Blood Sanctuary" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see if Shippou lives, what happen to them, what King Enma did, how Hiei revenges them and what goes on with Kagome. Also what the rest of the SD does to Enma.
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:50 CDT
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Thanks for the clarification. It really helps. And what's up with this cliffie in chapter 9? You're worse than I am at keeping people in suspense for the next chapter. I just tease them, you're torturing me! I don't like it when people beg for the next chapter and I try not to do it to other authors cause I know how hard it is to write the next chapters, but in this case you have caused me to brake my rules. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!!!!!! Please, I'll give you a cookie. (Turns pleading cute eyes at Mysterious_Tears)
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 13:47 CDT
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I loved it one again! But i was wrong about y she said shippo but oh well, this is just as good cuz ma other idea was a bit confusing anyways...lol...do u know ure spelling keiko or kayko differently i don't care i just wanted to know if u knew, hurry up n up update again!!!!wwwwoooooooooowoooooowooooo!lol
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 11:57 CDT
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nooooo!!!!!!!! poor shippo :( Update, you need to make things better...
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 01:46 CDT
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Really want to see more on this fic!! Its so good!! Please ^-^
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 23:30 CDT
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AHHH!!! That is so not fair! Please, please, please update soon! This is a really cool fic and I can't wait to read more! Soon please, arigato! Ja ne! Michi ^.~
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Reviewed By: Deathangel012990 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to know about the whole Hiei/Kagome baby,and why she said Shippo.Great chapter to!Please update!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 22:24 CDT
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Very good chapter, Im curious as to what happens next. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 21:27 CDT
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OMG!!!! I totally get y she said Shippor, what i don't get is da whole jewel reappearing but OMG!!!! That is wonderful! COME ON! Update...plzzz, i know its kinda soon but ppaallleeeezzz....lol...i love it!!!!
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 19:13 CDT
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We need to read more!!!! You need to update asap plz.
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Reviewed By: Jezebel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please update soon.
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Title: KEEP UP THE GO WORK
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_yoko_4ever_31 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What will happen now, since she's awake? How will the others react, when/if they ever find out about Kagome and Hiei? Does this mean that she's now his mate? Does she know? What will happen when/if she meets Koenma or even Enma? Please, please update real soon. If you do update real soon, you will be forgiven for not updating in a long time. ^^ I probably shouldn't be making any threats or demands on the author. Otherwise please update soon
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
me likey the story. continue please.
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 19:36 CST
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i as so glad that you update. I can't wait till you update again. THis is a great chap. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 15:43 CST
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update the story>< I hate cliffys when they're not done by me! It makes me think and thinking makes me ignore my boyfriend, which he hate so gets back at me by ignoring me. And I don't like being ignored!!!!!!
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