| "Love of Neptune" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: love it
Reviewed By: Shalimar23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love love it hope you write more soon. also love the fact that you had her hit that guy, for the first few sentences that i read about him i knew he was a pompus ass and needed to be put in his place. also thanks for making it seem like they would never see each other again, it really added to the suspense of the story.
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Reviewed By: keilani On: July 19, 2005 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
this love story left me longing for more.you must write another chapter that is long.you must have something more intense and romantic.it was a beautiful great love story
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Reviewed By: Big Fan On: May 17, 2002 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story of Neptune and Uranus it got me tingling just reading the part where the maid caught them *OOPS* Spoiler it was intence keep up the good work but I wish you ciuld have made it longer I like taking into a good story!! =) |
