| "Show me!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Show me
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 07:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn that was hot....
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 09:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is good for a first fic. there are only a few times in this story you can tell you are very young, but over all it is nice. you should keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: Vegetaslindalou On: September 15, 2005 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was so cute!! I love how you showed the strong then tender side of Vegeta. I could be Bulma any day. Keep up the great fics.
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