| "Dying Confession" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Can definitely see Inuyasha making a confession like that if he was dying, especially if he was in his human form. Loved how Kagome wouldn't give up on him. Great job as usual.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2009 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work!
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Reviewed By: Light-Eco-Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 11:56 CDT
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Actually, when CPR is done correctly, you will break a few ribs. But given the choice between dying and having a few broken ribs, the obvious choice is the best one.
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Reviewed By: JenJenJen On: January 20, 2008 12:12 CST
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omg... I nearly cried when i thought Inuyasha was dying! :(:(:( but I'm soo happy at the ending... I'm in love with your stories sooo much! And InuKag love of course! :)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Inuyasha's confession was sweet, and it was scary at the end. I'm just glad that Kagome was so determined tyo keep him with her. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: Gaskin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best story I've read so far!!!!!! Please make a sequel!!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who the fuck cares about the lemon that was fucking beautiful ^_^ i didnt breath the whole time he was about to die xD any way really good ^_^
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Title: Dying Confession
Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best one that i think i have read so far involving inuyasha's transformation. Extremely well written. I thought i was going to cry at one point. Kudos for props!!
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 22:54 CST
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waaahh! cute. i like his little autobiography, it was cute.
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Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 16:43 CST
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Stunning! I really thought he was going to die and she didn't let him! Beautiful!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 10:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my second reading of this story. and i don't want to use my inmagenation(i can't spell if my life depended on it) plz write sequal. ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I was actually screaming in my head 'NO! He CAN'T DIE!' lol. . . You are seriously one of my favorite authors. I just love your romance stories altogether! Ja ne! ~Kitsune_Magic_1~
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's THE sweetest thing! You had me thinking that he was going to die for a sec there. It figures that Inuyasha has to be about to die before he can tell Kagome that he loves her!
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Reviewed By: Howdy There On: September 28, 2005 21:40 CDT
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You have the ability to write a good story with excellent spelling and grammar, however the script style is very annoying, especially when you alternate between script style and narrative. Just use 'he said' or 'Kagome said' or whoever instead of their name with a colon. Maybe more people will review.
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story, I like how dramatic you made it and I loved the ending haha, very cute. =)
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