Title: Urk Reviewed By: DavR On: September 17, 2005 06:44 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: Please, please, please, for the love of all things Gundam, get a grammar beta. Your idea is quite interesting, and could be taken somewhere, but the formatting and grammar are very problematic. Since the fic appears in a single block, it's hard to read - at the very least separate paragraphs with a double line space. Please.
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