| "Of Legendary Creatures and Mystical Beasts" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: J On: October 29, 2004 11:52 CDT
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anou... you forgot to translate this chapter, Fi-senpai.
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Reviewed By: Sito On: March 03, 2003 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM WATING FOR THE COMING CHAPTERS
I LOVE YOUR STYLE[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: HimitsuTheHunter [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic. It is a masterwork which i am extreamly happy to have been able to witness. The Direct speack format takes some getting used to but is understandable due to the fics spanish origins. I love the amount of trouble you go throught to give well fleshed out back-ground on various things and situations. And i love the chariters! I'm psyched for the next installments to be translated... And thank you for bring this artwork to us engish speakers.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Oryo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 01:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got me again. At first, I needed a bit time to recall what happened before, but then it was really compelling. And a bit sad, because the relation is so tensed now. I hope they can fix it, I hope it won't provoke further problems. But if it does, well, then I will like it too, because I will describe it in the same breathtaking manner.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Chri On: January 24, 2003 05:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing I have to critizie is the way you handle direct speeches, it's a bit difficult to read them sometimes.
But that is completely made up by your great style of writing and the genius story! I hope the next chapter doesn't take as long as this one, but I rather like a good chapter than a rushed one. :)
Really great work![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: rk2003 On: January 05, 2003 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas complet the fic
please[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Midori^_^ On: November 18, 2002 11:00 CST
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Ah, it would be interesting to see a catfight between those two women. I love how you portray Enishi...so delightfully cold and calculating, but passionate, as always. I only hope I do him the justice that you do. Great job! Waiting for more...
~Midori^_~[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Oryo On: November 05, 2002 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Firuze! I did already want to read your story for a certain time, I don't know what took me not to do it earlier. The beginning is really intriguing in a very good way. The atmosphere is very capturing. When I didn't give a number for the rating, I didn't feel able to judge. It's mostly the case for grammar and spelling, because me too, I'm not an English native speaker. And it is difficult to say that the story is fun to read, because I wouldn't define my impression as fun, rather as fever.
May inspiration always be with you![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Goddess_of_Stupidity On: November 04, 2002 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ni hao! i mean hello F.K. desu!
nice chap:) anyway hehe thanks for including me in your list of thanks.
about my nick, hehehe...i named myself for writing stupid and crazy fanfics.(weird...)
oh well that's a compliment.
might i just add a comment:
in mandarin, the word "lin" doesn't exist in the dictionary. i'm refering to Mei-lin, though it's too late to change her name now. "Li" "Ling" are the only on'es that i could find closer to "Lin"
-hehehe after 13 years in a chinese school, i never did actually learn to speak fluent chinese...but i know how to read though, you can ask me i you want. t.y. Djai Jian![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Mara Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 11:53 CST
Comment/Review:
*looks around, no one reviewed so far*
Well, I already told how much I like this fic...
I am always waiting for the next chapter =^^=
As for the translation... *SIGH* I know the problem... it simply doesn't work this easily.[ Request Review Removal ] |
