| "The Ultimate Self Insertion Experience" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tenchi Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so beautiful.... I loved it soo much! it made me think what if somewhere out there our stories come true, how many people are living, loving, suffering through tears untold just because we thought it up, how many people will never get over the trauma we put them through... how many... *shrugs* oh well time to go finish killing off everyone Kagome loves
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story - this was an amazing read, and I very much thank the friend who pointed it out to me. This is definitely best left as a one-shot; it says everything it needs to say in this one short story. There were a couple of small typos in the actual structure of the fic, but not nearly enough to detract from the actual enjoyment. This is a fic I'm definitely going to be passing on to others - kudos for writing a thoughtful, meaningful story.
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Reviewed By: Carrotglace On: October 19, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was cool. I've done some interesting things with SI fics myself, but this is a neat idea. I was halfway expecting a comedy when I found this, very thoughtful though.
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Title: Deeep....
Reviewed By: YamiNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY eloquently written. WHere on earth did an idea like this come to you, I wonder? Don't tell me! It'll spoil the mystery! =^n__n^=
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Reviewed By: Corona, Prometheus's Pheonix On: June 15, 2003 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I think along similar lines all the time! |
Reviewed By: Priestess_of_the_Blade On: April 21, 2003 00:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. I am currently writing a self-insertion so your story made me think of some interesting things.Especially since my story will deal with the idea of imagination as a force that truly creates other worlds. I liked it. You Rock. Now I am inspired to work on my story more Thanks! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: cerberos On: April 08, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You! YOU MADE ME THINK! YOU MADE ME THINK! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! I like your story but it filled my head with so many questions! Questions I can't answer! Questions like when I write a story,can my characters possibly do the same as that character searching for her creator? Whew! What if it was true? What if that indeed happened? But instead of the author knowing his/her character out there, he/she doesn't feel her presence and goes on with what he/she was writing. Then the character wouldn't know her creator's and she'd just get suck back and fall into the arms of her friends... wondering what ever was her mission, her purpose in life for when she finally found what she was looking for... nothing happened. As if everything she did was nothing...
Anohter run-on sentence. Sorry. But anyway, the story was nice especially the ending. It made the screws in my head turn and woke up my sleeping neurons. Wish I could come up with fresh ideas too. Thanks |
Reviewed By: Mistress Of Bologna On: April 05, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. It made me wonder not only about fanfic characters, but about us, humans. Why we are here and if we aren't just something someone is controlling through a computer. It is highly original, and I hope you do continue this, it's good. It seems to me you could also maybe turn this into a .hack//SIGN fanfic. To the little I've seen of the series, it seems very similar to that.
Happy Writing,
Mistress of Bologna |
Reviewed By: Karete-chan On: January 13, 2003 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was terrific! The story really holds you, like a good one-off should. (It is a one off isn't it?)
Sad but sweet at the same time. I wish I could write like that. |
Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know my creations are out to kill me... for killing their life mates.. for killing off their families... for breaking their hearts.
I loved this, my characters have changed worlds so many times. |
Reviewed By: bhakame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why, speechless?
Speechless because it's too good. Really good. Damn good. I don't have to say anymore "good" because you know how good your work is and I'm proud of you.
Actually, I'm also writing a story with the same topic, "stories between reality and these writings". It's main character is also a girl yet, difference is... it's longer than yours. Yours wouls be the summarized one, mine would be the detailed one. Really animetic. I guess you would know just by the title
"Indivisible refelction"
Can't explain any further.
Anyway, your story isn't boring, it isn't that fun, but it sure is an inspiration to all of the writers that have read your masterpiece!
Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Draconicality [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 03:29 CST
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Oo-er...my brain finds it hard to grasp concepts as infinite as this. Interesting, original plot, though, and it's like I could feel the undercurrent of...um...arg, dunno how to say it. Suffice to say this made me feel more fulfilled as an author, since I've often wondered on a similar topic myself. *sighs* Oh, to live in one's own stories... |
Reviewed By: noodlepower On: December 20, 2002 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was something totally original and different. I loved it. Totally amazing dude. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 03:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. I really makes you think about the girl and what she will do with her freedom, all the adventures she will have, the people she can/will entwine her life with.
It makes me wonder, that maybe, while reading an unrelated fan-fiction sometime, somewhere, she might not be lurking in a crowd somewhere in that story, or talking on a phone in the background or be a random officer on a space vessel in another fan-fiction.
Perhaps she is the unnamed, unspoken, unlooked for character created to fill a gap in a story, or the 'cannon fodder' of other fan-fics out there.
Gee, I wonder where she will be led and I wonder if anyone will recognize her if they do manage to catch a glimspe as she leaps through another portal. Kinda makes me think of that sci-fi show 'Sliders'.
Anyway, I am babbling what I really mean to say is your short little peice has really made me think. I like it when a story does that. |
Reviewed By: Ersyth On: November 09, 2002 14:51 CST
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This is an interesting story with a neat idea, though I thought it was a little short. Can you elaborate a little? Otherwise, it's good.
Thanks for a good read! |
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