| "Life: Lies, Confession, and Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 (not logged in) On: September 24, 2005 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay...I haven't read all of it yet because I have to leave soon, but of what I read...I like how you were going, but...try to look at your words and how you use them plus type out the 2s and all that stuff...and when you have some one thinking you need to use the single things ' and ' and put more spaces inbetween the sentences and paragraphs...you did an okay job and I hope that you can fix your errors...luvs Ty < 3
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Reviewed By: mimiy14 On: September 19, 2005 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i liked it alot. dont talk so much. i cant wait for the baby!!!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: September 19, 2005 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read the first four chapters of your story. I am sorry to say that I will not be reading anymore of it. It is a pity too, because it sounded like a very interesting story. However, you use too much chat room spelling for my taste. Is it really too much trouble to spell out "see", "you", "because", "two"? Spelling and grammer can really make or break a story.
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