Title: Dear God!
Reviewed By: Midnyte Wolf On: September 19, 2005 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Enjoyment Factor would be through the ROOF right now if I had a frickin' choice woman! Oh. My. God. *hypervintilates* That was the most amazing story EVER!!! I'm sorta, kinda new to Naruto and only after a few episodes (and some reads of the manga) did I flip and take off for fanfiction. I originally wanted to see something with Naruto and Sasuke (freak for yaoi- oh yeah! whoop!)but for some reason every story left me unsatisfied in some way. But then I found this... something I never considered. Iruka and Kakashi? ...AMAZING! I think you have started a whole new obession with me! God! *faints* The story was... so... AMAZING! *needs a new word..* *swoooons* Oh, I completely love the way everything happens except... maybe the switching from place to place... it could have been so much better if it had flowed instead of pointed out. But dear God! I hate it so much when people write a story with such feelings and they kiss and it's like *poof!* "ohmigod! I love you too! I just didn't know!" When really things might not happen like that. And of anything it might take a roller coaster dive. I was SO EFFIN' relieved when that did not happen. It took a minute, and that was GREAT! I could see everything from Iruka's point of view and it all made sense... I knew how he was feeling and why! AMAZING! (darn it... *new word, new word...*) Oh goodness... I'm out of breath... ARE YOU HAPPY NOW!? I am... Wonderous, girl! Pure wonderous! *applauds*
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