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"Forever Abyss" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: kakashidiot  On: September 27, 2005 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Finish it. It's so awesome! If you don't, I think somebody else will steal the idea...and then where would you be? I think it's great. Especially the helplessness of Kakashi and the anger of Iruka.
 Reviewed By: Admantius Rowan [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 17, 2005 22:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must say that I am intruiged. I mean, I have always known that it was possible for a shinobi to be injured, but my mind always supplied "but they'll get better!" For some reason the idea of a shinobi going blind never crossed my mind, but you have my attention! One thing that I hope might happen, if Kakashi really is permanantly blind, is that he learns to deal with it and still be a jounin, just because he's so damn cool. Just a suggestion. You must write more! ^_~

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