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| "Loss, Once A Century" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Review From the FFARG
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 21:37 CDT
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This is a well thought out story. I hope you're planing on adding to it. If I was to desire one things, it would be more to the story. Who is the stranger, and why did he come to this town? How long have the villagers been "sacrificing" one girl. How do they know he doesn't eat them, once back at the castle? I know, most of these questions aren't really important, I'm just curious by nature, and like have a ton of details in the stories I read. I love the surprise that she's not to be eaten, by married. Didn't sign in last time.
| Title: Review From the FFARG
Reviewed By: Lina19 On: September 22, 2005 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a well thought out story. I hope you're planing on adding to it. If I was to desire one things, it would be more to the story. Who is the stranger, and why did he come to this town? How long have the villagers been "sacrificing" one girl. How do they know he doesn't eat them, once back at the castle? I know, most of these questions aren't really important, I'm just curious by nature, and like have a ton of details in the stories I read. I love the surprise that she's not to be eaten, by married.
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