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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was really cool. It took awhile but then I got who started all this and the secret identity thing. I'm glad everything worked out for almost everyone. Very nice work. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: loussi On: May 09, 2006 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the plot, and that Kakarott don't simply forgive Vegeta everything and that Vegeta had to earn the trust of Kakarott again.
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Reviewed By: RowinaDequina16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 18:41 CST
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I'm a sucker for happy endings, and lemons in the last chapter! This fic pulled me in from the start--they were so young and innocent. K as a smith was a good choice, and the story of K's family life before and after V was just intriguing. It's such a romantic story, tragic at times of course, but it all comes out okay. I especially enjoyed how you let K have his "down-time" with the servant, and how ultimately that didn't threaten his relationship with Vegeta. I also love how you get in the characters' heads, their inner dialogue. It's very insightful. Well-done! I can't wait to start reading your next one.
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: February 07, 2006 17:02 CST
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First off, I am really glad you feel that way about my reviews. I've always felt that I get the better end of the deal; you do all the hard work coming up with great ideas and writing them, and all I do is sit back and enjoy, so the least I could do is leave a review to show how much I like your stories. Second, yay for happy endings!!! It seems everything was resolved nicely, Vegeta even learned about their baby, though what the king tried to do to Kakarott really caught me by surprise, it's nice to know that there are some twists even in the last chapter. Well, I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work in the future, it never disappoints :D
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: February 03, 2006 11:57 CST
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Wow!!!! Nice ending. I really enjoyed this fic looking forward to more from you Grate job LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: January 15, 2006 22:16 CST
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Only one more chapter left? I'm really looking forward to it, but at the same time I don't want it to end yet. And, Kakarott seems more miserable than ever, now I'm worried that it won't be an entirely happy ending for him... but he has to end up with Vegeta! They were meant for each other! Hasn't he suffered enough? Yeah, sometimes I'm a hopeless romantic. Well, can't wait to see how it all ends, I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: December 26, 2005 21:45 CST
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This was a great chapter. Kakarott and Vegeta finally kissed, woohoo! Hopefully Kakarott won't get discouraged because of what Damaro said, though the king seems to have accepted the fact that Vegeta loves Kakarott, so that's a plus. Well, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: December 26, 2005 16:08 CST
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Man He can't win can he? Now they have loved and that freek in the cell has given Kacorrot doughts again I hope it works out. TTYS LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 09:36 CST
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ACK..theres a bomb strap to my chest that going to go off if you don't update soon!!!!!...plez
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: December 17, 2005 01:50 CST
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Although Vegeta and Kakarott's kiss wasn't exactly consensual, I still found it extremely sweet, go figure :D And I am so glad Kakarott finally realized that Vegeta really does care for him... yay, progress is being made, though it took Vegeta almost dying for it to happen... everything always has to be complicated, huh? And, it seems like they'll still be faced with a dilemma, Vegeta's dad doesn't appear to be too fond of Kakarott (and he's really mean about it too). Anyway, loved the chapter, and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: December 16, 2005 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Owe! Poot Kacorrot LOL Will Vegeta live? Or will he die before Kacorrot realises fully how much Vegeta means to him...Oh Please up date soon Thank you yes we are doing better, it was a busted water main in the city and the over flow from the river we get our water suply from. Thank you for asking LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: December 14, 2005 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you she is doing a bit better now. It causes from the water here we installed filters for drinking and cooking water now. Any who, Grate chapter, For Vegeta a small glimps of hope... See Ya LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 18:33 CST
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wow..sad..how vegeta controls himself..for he loves kacorot so much..u can't find many guys like him...
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: December 08, 2005 20:21 CST
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Hey, they're talking civilly with each other! Well, for the most part at least. Still, it's a step in the right direction, and that's enough progress for the moment. Are we going to find out what happened to the guy that killed Radditz? Did Kakarott manage to avenge his brother? Anyway, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: November 30, 2005 00:42 CST
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So, Veliro is safe for now. But is it going to stay that way? Something is going to have to happen to him, or between him and Kakarott, if Vegeta ever hopes to win Kakarott back; either that or Kakarott falls in love with Vegeta again, but it doesn't seem that will happen anytime soon. The baby was frozen?! That is so sad. I am going to go cry now. Well, hope you update soon.
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