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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: December 14, 2005 23:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you she is doing a bit better now. It causes from the water here we installed filters for drinking and cooking water now. Any who, Grate chapter, For Vegeta a small glimps of hope... See Ya LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 18:33 CST
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wow..sad..how vegeta controls himself..for he loves kacorot so much..u can't find many guys like him...
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: December 08, 2005 20:21 CST
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Hey, they're talking civilly with each other! Well, for the most part at least. Still, it's a step in the right direction, and that's enough progress for the moment. Are we going to find out what happened to the guy that killed Radditz? Did Kakarott manage to avenge his brother? Anyway, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: November 30, 2005 00:42 CST
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So, Veliro is safe for now. But is it going to stay that way? Something is going to have to happen to him, or between him and Kakarott, if Vegeta ever hopes to win Kakarott back; either that or Kakarott falls in love with Vegeta again, but it doesn't seem that will happen anytime soon. The baby was frozen?! That is so sad. I am going to go cry now. Well, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: PrinceKatreena On: November 29, 2005 20:22 CST
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Verry sad now he need to tell the Prince the truth, but can he? Will His new lover tell Vegeta or is he willing to give up this closeness he has with Kaccorot? Please up date soon Oh PS Sorry it took so lobg to review this chapter and the other story it been a bad few weeks with my daughter sick, any way Bye BYe LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmmm..interesting..this is my 1st DBw/e...for me to read..and it is realy nice..please continue...^^
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: November 24, 2005 09:45 CST
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Wow mow that was intence. Hmm but he love the young sevent or is it his manme or is he hopping t get even with the prince? Well I will try to wait but....it is soo hard....is it ready yet? Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: November 21, 2005 15:49 CST
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Ooh, very nice chapter. Not being over Vegeta obviously isn't going to stop Kakarott from tending to his needs, but now I'm worried about what will happen to Veliro when Vegeta finds out. Keep up the nice work, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: November 13, 2005 18:04 CST
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Yeah, I liked this chapter! Poor Kakarott, still too paranoid, is he ever going to be happy again? Poor Vegeta, will he ever regain Kakarott's trust? And poor Veliro, how the hell did he get mixed up in all of this? I hope Vegeta learns about the baby, but how is he going to react.... Ooh, suspenseful. I'll be waiting for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: November 11, 2005 23:56 CST
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HI wow better and better. Please oh please up date soon must know if Vegeta can save the love they had once or will the young sevent take his place? Hmmm hurry please!!! LOL Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: NewFan On: October 30, 2005 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay, alternate universes are so fun to read, especially if they are well written. I love how it's a serious fic with hints of humor (e.g. Kakarott and the servant) and I am looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds.
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: October 30, 2005 12:47 CST
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Revenge is a good thing...but love love must truphant please Kacorrot remember your love n' dad it was he d a diffrent way, punnish Vegetas' dad it was he who stop the prince to begin with Oh will it work or are they doomed to hate each other? Update soon LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: October 29, 2005 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What not breathing why not?! They find each other now he is dieng or is it a ploy to escape? Oh please don't leave me hanging here Up date soon See ya LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: October 01, 2005 15:44 CDT
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HI Sorry I did not review your last chapter so this is for both of them. I like how you are stiing this story up so far Please keep up the good work Up date soon Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 17, 2005 23:23 CDT
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Wow fish as a gift hmmmm.naw I pass LOL! Cool story so far Naughty Vegeta fibbing, he needs a spanking! Up date soon LadyKATT
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