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| "Death be quick" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should continue to write on what you have...I liked it but I think you need more...like what happens next? Good job by the way! until next time, luvs Ty < 3
| Reviewed By: myztik_shadow_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
An interesting fic ... I liked the drive behind it. It was an interesting choice of topic; I like how you took an everyday thing and factored it into this. However, there was a problem with your formatting. Every time someone different is speaking, you have to make a new paragraph, this disperses confusion and makes it all easier to read. Another thing, you might want to describe a few details a bit more, such as where Kagome got the revolver and what not. Other than those slightly minor, partly major, problems this fic is fairly well done. Good work! Keep it up; I hope to see something more from you in the near future. Oh, and by the way, I hope you've never felt like Kagome did in this piece of work; and if you have, I hope you've reached your consolation. ~Clarissa Ann Mirko
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