"If It Makes You Happy" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: im_alive On: May 17, 2009 16:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I got done with your one piece fic and just had to reread this one. Of course you already know how I feel about this treasure but I do have one question. If Ebon doesn't want anyone to know about his Gear dream why does he keep telling everyone? I mean really why would he go through the trouble of telling hotstreak?
| Title: Yay! Reviewed By: i_malive On: September 21, 2005 09:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love it I really do, and I am so glad I found another site with your fics. I am going to be on the look out for Right Here.
| Reviewed By: Tri On: September 21, 2005 02:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hiya dude mdear!! you know me of course, the wonderful Tri!!! You already have my reviews from ff.net!! so i just wanted to be the first to review your static shock stuff on media miner... just one critique though...you have GOT to figure out how to put a space between your paragraphs....they all sorta mesh together and makes the format seem amatuer when the writing is excellent...and no DONT try to reupload your pieces....just try something different when you upload the sequel.... and ahhh, this is still amazing...and i LOVED the added chapter 9...made things so much more intersting, understanding, and just....perfect. amazing. ok, ima go sleepy now! Tri
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