| "Wherever You Will Go" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: March 06, 2002 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this-the family reunion from Hell. Poor Trunks. Just when he thought it was safe to go into the kitchen Mom and Dad show up when they're supposed to be dead-lol. Cool father-son bonding, Vegeta style, and some great one liners too. As the author I'm sure you know which ones I'm talking about. Good job. Can't wait to read more. (^_^). |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I really liked the gravity room scenes. Ah, father/son bonding, isn't it great? I like how Trunks knows when to back down and when not to with Vegeta. I also enjoyed the 'water' scene. I wonder what Veggie's hiding? Well I guess I'll just have to wait and wait... and wait (if you haven't already figured it out, I want you to update soon ^_^) to find out. I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I'll read it as soon as I get home from work (my mom's making me go). You read the least chapter of When You Least Expect, (please ^_~).-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2002 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was such a great chapter! Fight scene was great but the kicker was Trunks finding the hole in his kitchen. LOL! I can't wait to see what you have in store next.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 05, 2002 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowwowwow! Great chapter. You've got to write more soon. Finally they're out of hell, so what's gonna happen next? Update please. Peace |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2002 00:28 CST
Comment/Review:
That's suppose to be I CAN'T wait. Sorry, I'm very sleepy.-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2002 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate spiders too, Bulma! They're absolutly disgusting. Yuck! Anyway, once again another great chapter. I can wait to see what happens next.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 28, 2002 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I felt my skin crawling there for awhile. Can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter! Waiting for the next one. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 03:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapters. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg I haven't cried like this in quite a while. I feel so sorry for Bulma. That was some chapter. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2002 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, Bulma really gets attached doesn't she? I mean she went to Nemek for Yamucha and then to Hell for Vegeta. The girl really knows the meaning of unconditional love. Anyway this is a really good fic. I almost cried (I had to leave the computer to stop myself, I really should get a life). I am looking forward to your next update. -JB. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 21, 2002 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go!! Another scum bites the dust. You did the right thing killing off the asshole. He was a complete waste of oxygen. Can't wait for the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2002 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job! I really liked it I can't wait to see what you do with the next chapter.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 20, 2002 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta can be such a jerk sometimes, to say things like that to Bulma. Anyway, good chapter and looking forward to the next. |
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