| "No More Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 07:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have managed to keep your life. I enjoy reading your stories so don't think for a minute I would let you die! You better not let this seris end ever though. I think I would cry my eyes out if you did. I loved how this finished as well. It was cute, but not too much OOC on Hiei's part. I know some authors make Hiei too OOC when he has to meet Shiori. I've down it before too. So that makes you my god!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: October 04, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was freain awsome. Write more stories please!!!!
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! i like the good reaction...normaly its a 40chapter bad reaction (not that i don't ike those too, but its nice for some variety) If you'd like, I am still interested in betaing your stuff...SweetMisery1
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 08:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
NO! I demand that you make this work out in a good way. If Kurama loses his mother, then you better pray to Enma-daioh that your death comes swift and painlessly! And that's a promise!! Great story/chapter though!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: September 20, 2005 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to update soon!!! i really want to find out what happends next.
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