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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: October 19, 2005 11:51 CDT
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Very nice, very sweet. I await more.
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
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So far so good! I like this idea. If you could write longer chapters it would be better though.
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Title: nicely done
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ery nice and cute. Awww...Inuyasha cries. I like this story. You should continue with this. That is funny how Kouga is Kagome's babysitter...lol. Its very original. Hope you update.
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: October 10, 2005 08:42 CDT
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Interesting, I very much like.
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: October 09, 2005 16:20 CDT
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That was a horrible place to quit. I need to read more of this cute story. Kouga was Kagome's babysitter? Just thinking about that is too funny. Please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: Xakana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2005 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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It's a very interesting story, although several names are misspelled (Ayame is Kouga's woman, for instance and I'm assuming the doctor was Jinenji?, Tetsusaiga or Tessaiga are the spellings for InuYasha's sword). It's an entertaining story.
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Reviewed By: Kitani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What the hecks going on here? ^_^ Please continue because this is starting to look a bit interesting!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 22:01 CDT
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I love it sweetie! Write more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Reddragon69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 00:02 CDT
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What?
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice indeed my dear. Up on Xanga you go. I haven't updated my site but I intend to today and up you go ^_^
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Title: Intersting
Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 02:14 CDT
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I like it so far. Can't wait for the next installment my dear. ^_^
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