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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 22:44 CST
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That last chaptor was so kewl i cant wait till the next one
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: November 19, 2005 22:08 CST
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Lol! Serves those bakas right!
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Title: Awsome as usual! Thanks too!
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the disclaimer...~blush~ I hope ppl will read our story! I have a feeling we'll have a big jump in hits on that one cuz of ur advertisment. Ok, back to the chappie: Simply awsome! I like ur discription on Tensaiga and Kagome's attack on Sesshy and Inuyasha. Go Kagome! Keep up the great work!
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Title: vmthirumal
Reviewed By: Venkatesh On: October 30, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't help but notice the numerous spelling errors in the fanfic and if i might make a suggestion, i ask you to send it to someone to proofread for you
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Title: Kool!
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally read your update. I have to say, it was pretty well done. I love the whole MokoMoko-sama thing. Ah, I notice that you changed the spelling on "sesshomaru"'s name as well. I hope you continue with the chapters because I wanna know what happens next!
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so kewl more please
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Reviewed By: MoonDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 11:38 CDT
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Inu and Sess are in trouble now! *wickedly amused laughter* Can't wait for Kagome to teach those two a lesson, this should be good. Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: October 27, 2005 08:58 CDT
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Ho ho! K-bird's temper flares strong again. Now if only Sesshoumaru had subjugation beads. ^_~
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Title: Kool!
Reviewed By: turtlequeen2 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done! Sesshoumaru cries...thats new...but so interesting to NOT read. It's not often where you come to a story that has a good reason why he cries...even though its a lil OOC, but still good. Very compelling. I hope the pups are ok. And how did Rin survive this long? Unless I missed something...
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: October 25, 2005 16:36 CDT
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Inuyasha will surely be in for it from Kagome.
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Reviewed By: MoonDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 13:53 CDT
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DUDE!! Your endings are killing me. It's almost as bad as when the show stops with Inuyasha losing the fight. UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 15:29 CDT
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hmmm, very interesting. Poor Taiga.
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Reviewed By: MoonDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 13:08 CDT
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What Happened! I'm gonna go nuts! Update sooooon PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf (nsi) On: October 23, 2005 00:19 CDT
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Very nice, very interesting. Do continue! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MoonDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 20:52 CDT
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That was a rather cruel way to end the chapter, I really want to know what Inuyasha thinks of this little twist.
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